D'aww, that was just to cute. I'd like to have a mr. Hedgy for myself.
So far this is a fun read while keeping me entertained with your humor and cute moments. Keep it up.

Not bowing to royalty he's either dumb or full of himself doesn't matter what you think it's proper etiquette to bow to a king or queen or any member of royalty. The whole everyone is equal thing is nice but lets keep it real Celestia riaising the FUCKING SUN and she raised the moon to while Luna was on the moon and she's lived for like a thousand years pretty sure she's superior to him.

6327528 eh, depends on religion and belief. But in all honesty, most people would bow, but I do know a few that wouldn't, only reason being is because they're really just representatives and don't actually do anything in the government really.

She smiled, “Oh I think I would like tha-AAAAIIIIIIII!” She squeaked because she got groped hard by Chris who then took off running down the hall. “Oh I am going to enjoy him.” Celestia said with a giggle.

So he groped her tits and got away with it.

How does one perform such dangerous action?

6476919 My guess, luck and run really really fast before she has time to react

6476919 By being confident...

...it also doesn't hurt when the princess flirts with you first and initiates the game of cat and mouse

I'd pick a ferret, but a hedgehog is pretty cool too

“Right….” Chris hesitated before rapping on the door a few times waiting for a response when he got a clear “you may come in” from behind the door the guard nodded and you opened the door and went in.

This is a first person story or is it a second person story?

Chris shook his head, “I understand you’re a princess and such and you deserve to be treated with respect as much as anyone else would when first met, but that’s just it. To me, you are just some one else, to me everyone is equal, no one is lesser or greater. And if that’s a problem then I’m afraid you’ll just have to deal with it.”

FINALLY! Thank you, Chris. I was sick of the whole bowing in stories!

“Chris McGrath, pleased to meet you, your highness.” He said with a curt bow.

Dammit, Chris! And I had high hopes in you too!

human that likes animals and is shy with a romance tag and fluttershy tag. Hmm most likely ship is fluttershy

“Well that’s good to hear, now, since it’s going to take an hour or two for Enis to get here, I want you to go talk to my sister, she wanted to meet this creature from the white.” She said with a smirk as they entered the castle.
Chris facepalmed, “Really? The being from the white? Is that what I’m going to be known as?”
“Only if that’s the name you want to be in the papers tomorrow.” She joked.

Chris shook his head, “I understand you’re a princess and such and you deserve to be treated with respect as much as anyone else would when first met, but that’s just it. To me, you are just some one else, to me everyone is equal, no one is lesser or greater. And if that’s a problem then I’m afraid you’ll just have to deal with it.”

Finally, someone who's not a total pushover...

I wanted to see a new place no one on my planet has seen. You see my species we like to explore, expand and learn.

6327528 Let's not forget though that Chris doesn't know she raises the sun, therefore has no reason to bow out of fear of power. He also is not one of her subjects and yes if he were a diplomat or something he would bow out of respect for another's culture but he's not so he really has no reason to bow.

YOU HAVE AWAKEND MOLESTIA YOU HAVE DOOMED US ALL

7681610 EVERYBODY PPPPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *PANICS AND RUNS AROUND THE ROOM WAVING ARMS EVERY WHERE*

When I read this I instantly thought of Chris doing this "She smiled, “Oh I think I would like tha-AAAAIIIIIIII!” She squeaked because she got groped hard by Chris who then took off running down the hall."

I don't enjoy invoking Godwin's Law, but this is nearing grammatical failure on the level of My Immortal.
Get a goddamned proofreader.

I want him to be with molly

7751633
SEEEERRPPPAANNTINNE!!!!!!

That hit close to home

Celestia nodded, “As do I and I am sorry Chris that this came to a dead end.”

Is this a pun?

“And you won’t bow?” Celestia asked him.

Chris shook his head, “I understand you’re a princess and such and you deserve to be treated with respect as much as anyone else would when first met, but that’s just it. To me, you are just some one else, to me everyone is equal, no one is lesser or greater. And if that’s a problem then I’m afraid you’ll just have to deal with it.”

Ok, for all the cringe before, this is the final straw. I skipped most of the previous chapter to see if it got any better. No. It only gets worse.

I just... no. Would you really do that if you were in a dictator's country? Your head would be rolling around the floor before you could even blink.

Easily the most cringy fanfic I read this year.

I read a decent amount of this fic a while back but i didnt finish it and all the chapters are unmarked now. Minor inconvenience that i felt like whining about.

“I-I have room and I don’t mind, he’s really nice and he said he’s good with animals. That is, if he doesn’t mind.” She said with a smile.

I knew it.

So you finally got away from all those idiots you called family. Took you long enough, I hated them, all of them. You have no idea how much I wanted to hurt them, hear them scream in pain as I broke them like the broke us. ’Shut up.’

Oh god. No... I have had very bad experiences with seconds, copilots, bounded, passengers, and other such things. The only one I’ve ever met that I didn’t want or need to kill was Polaris, and even he has murderous tendencies on occasion.

(And by I, I mean Perceiver/Blue Midnight, who is just me in very different circumstances. I reserve the right to be in character from time to time.)

She blushed, “Well it was around the time Discord came around, a spirit of pure chaos, disharmony, and well discord. He has the ability to change a pony’s nature. He managed to get a hold of me at some point and while I’m normally a kind, respectful and caring ruler. When he changed my nature I became a rude, personal space invaded, obnoxious ruler. The ponies at the time called me Molestia because my actions tended to be me molesting my subjects in some way or another, and so the nickname Molly was created because it’s much easier to yell out “Molly is coming, hide!” than it is “Molestia is coming, hide!”

Molestia lives!!!!!

He was just standing there, staring at her tits with a boner

This was a epic chapter.

Interessting story. I guess he has some kind of split personality?

The girls looked around, “Well I would princess, but there’s barely enough room for me and Spike here.” Twilight said nervously.

Well That's Bullshit! Her house is big