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PredictableOffender


Don't let your memes be dreams

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This story is a sequel to Quicksilver


2nd Person

You had come a rich family and had always been a bright kid with a talent for magic and had even been a top student at the Canterlot Magic academy. However dealing with the other people, their expectations, their judgments and their schemes proves too much for you so you moves off to the town of Ponyville to start a new life. You make no friends in Ponyville and only have a dog for companionship but you are happy.

As much as you want to resist it, all good things come to an end.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 7 )
Comment posted by Green Bird deleted Jul 30th, 2015

it could improve. However the idea is good. you should use the grammar online it will help you throughout your books.
it's decent for now 5/10

Oooh a secret admired. Hmm a nice old love story.i like it.

A Nice chapter if I say so my self. Nice job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter as always.

Why not give this story a 2nd person tag?

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