Rare Reflection

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We have all been through a long and tiresome day at some point or another.

The problem comes when we lose that spark in our eyes. Cause what good is a star that has lost its light?

You fight, but it's so hard to find the strength to wake up.

But with the help of friends, and a spark of generosity, everything is possible.

Edited by the best big sister ever, VitalSpark. Thanks sis!
Proofread by: Dogelol

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Moosetasm

Moosetasm #1 · Sep 24th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I loved it! Descriptions were nice, it was well paced, and Pinkie talked a mile-a-minute.

Fantastic work.

There was only one part that made me twitch.

Calm down, sugarcane

AJ is bemused now, Happy?

Infinity Shade

Infinity Shade #2 · Sep 24th, 2015 · · ·

6455710 Aww, thank you! Happy to hear you liked it! Yeah, Pinkie is very is easy to write, however many writers just write her as a silly goofball and I hope I avoided that

And that I don't know really where that came from, I just tried out something new

RarityEQM

RarityEQM #3 · Sep 24th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I loved it. <3

Infinity Shade

Infinity Shade #4 · Sep 24th, 2015 · · ·

6456712 Yay!

Whinifree

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Whinifree

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Pony writer #8 · Sep 25th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Very nice

Jarvy Jared

Jarvy Jared #9 · Sep 25th, 2015 · 3 · ·

A beautiful, well-written, thought-provoking piece. If I may be so bold as to suggest that Generosity is actually one of the most important assets in making a friendship? After all, you have to be pretty generous to open yourself to others and hope that you'll make that special connection.

Generosity, as you explained, isn't just giving things to others. It's giving yourself to others, for their happiness—which eventually becomes your own happiness. Their joy is your joy.

We would do well to remember, then, just how valuable Generosity is for Friendship. It may seem like a rare thing to use; but you may find, if you look hard enough, that it is one of the bases of the foundations for friendship.

-Jarvy Jared

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