A New World

by Dream Searcher

An End Once and For All: The Happy End

I was lying in my bed, thinking about the decision the ponies would have to make. It had been two weeks since the storm and it seemed that Rainbow’s wing was almost back to normal. This was the last week that the spell would be active, the ponies needed to make a decision and fast. I want them to stay, because they are my friends and I can’t leave Rainbow. But on the other side I want them to leave, they have friends and family in their world. If I was trapped in their world, then I would want to return to my world, I would want to go back to my friends and family. It’s not an easy decision, that I know, but it has to be made real soon.

Knowing that I wouldn’t sleep anymore, I quietly got out of bed and went to my kitchen. I needed a drink, but no Scotch or I will pass out again. I went to the fridge and opened it. It seemed there was some Red wine that will do. I took the bottle and a glass, poured the red liquid in the glass and sat on the couch. When I drank I heard hooves stepping behind me. I turned around and saw Rainbow with a smirk on her face.

“Well, well, well, are we drinking again? If you don’t die from alcohol poisoning than I don’t know how you will die” She giggled and sat next to me on the couch, she laid her head on my lap. I stroked her mane, she liked that.

“Do you want to get rid of me?” I replied with a playful grin. She looked up at me with a sad expression on her face.

“No, not at all, but I’ve a feeling that things will change soon.” Her eyes began to water, she began crying. I pulled her into a hug, it seemed to calm her.

“I know Rainbow, I know. When it’s morning we’ll go to Twilight, we’re going to think of a solution.” She gave me a false smile, but deep inside I knew there wasn’t a solution, I had to let go of her.

“Alright then, now let’s get some more sleep.” She pushed me down on the couch and laid herself on my chest. It felt good to have her on my chest, one last time.

*****

It was 7 AM and Rainbow and I were walking towards Twilight’s house. We haven’t eaten anything, we were too nervous. We knocked on Twilight’s door and to our surprise it instantly opened. We went inside and saw that Twilight was reading a scroll. It was the scroll with the spell on it. She went towards Rainbow and hugged her; it seemed that Rainbow was crying.

“Do we… really have to… leave?” She said between sobs, Twilight also began to cry. I just felt my stomach turning.

“I’m sorry Rainbow, but we have to. Who knows what happened in Equestria? Not to mention that our friends and family are probably worried sick about us. As much as I love being here, we just have to...” With those words I knew that this was my last day with Rainbow. My eyes began to water by just thinking how empty my life would be without her. “Now, I want you to leave and enjoy your last day with Jack. You need to be back here at 7 PM, then we’re going to… leave.”

“Ok. Come on, Jack. We’re going to enjoy our last day together.” She walked out of the library and I followed her, I could hear Twilight sobbing lightly.

We really enjoyed our last day together. We first walked in the woods, it was her last time she would see the nature of Earth. After our walk we drove to the place where Hugo died, she wanted to say goodbye to him and it felt good to be there again. Thanks to the ponies I managed to accept Hugo’s dead. I also took some lunch with me since it was a two hour drive. When lunch was over Rainbow showed me her famous Sonic Rainboom, and the shockwave knocked me to the ground. She flew down and helped me to get up.

“Wow, I didn’t know it was so strong.” I said, taking her hoof and slowly regaining my balance. She laughed a bit.

“I know, I don’t do it much, only when people ask me to or in an emergency.” We walked towards the car. When we arrived at the car she stopped. “Can we now do something a little more romantic?” She looked at me, a blush appearing on her cheek.

“I thought you would never ask.” We both hopped into the car and began kissing.

*****

It was 6.45PM when we arrived at my farm. I looked at Rainbow; she had tears in her eyes. I gave her a hug and a quick kiss and we both hopped out of the car. It was quiet during our walk to the library, the intense silence only to be disrupted by Rainbow’s sobbing. I knocked on her door and Twilight opened. Rainbow and I went inside. I looked around, everypony was there, but there was a pony extra. I looked at her, she was that white alicorn from my dreams.

“Princess Celestia, what are you doing here?” Rainbow asked, her tears stopping and she bowed.

“My dear Rainbow Dash, I have just informed Twilight about a disaster in Manehattan. I told her that Equestria needs the elements of Harmony and that everypony needs to return.” Rainbow eyes began to water, she then flew into my arms.

“I don’t want to leave him.” She hugged me and I hugged her back.

“I know, and that’s why he’s coming with us.” She smiled at me, but my mind was still progressing what she had said.

“But I don’t want to leave… wait, what?” She stopped hugging and looked at Celestia.

“What?” Was my reaction.

This was followed by the other ponies in the room and Spike. “What?”

“He will go with us to Equestria, but not how he is, I will need to transform him a bit.”

I cocked an eyebrow at her. “Transform how?” I had a pretty clear idea what she wanted to do, but I wanted to make sure.

“You’re going to be a pony, you silly.” Pinkie spoke up, I felt I was going to faint.

Rainbow noticed this and jumped to the ground. “Um Jack, you don’t look so good.” I replied by shutting my eyes and falling on the ground.

*****

It was dark when I opened my eyes. I was still lying on the floor, but I could see the moon shine through the windows. Well that was weird, the windows looked much higher. I turned my head to the right and felt like I was just hit by a truck. Rainbow stood next to me, she was nuzzling my face. I wanted to stroke her mane, but I couldn’t move my arms. When I managed to bring my arm next to my face, I looked at it.

“Look, my arm is now a foreleg.” I was still a bit sedated due to my fainting. It took me 10 seconds to realize that something was not right here. “AAAH, MY ARM IS A FORELEG!” I screamed out, the energy came back to me and I began to move everything of my new body. Rainbow laid down on me, to calm me down.

“Shh, you’re just a pony.” I looked at her, at her warm smile. That calmed me down.

“Rainbow, this is not me, I’m not a pony, I’m human.” She came closer to my face.

“Not anymore, you’re a pony and you’re my pony.” She kissed me on my lips.

One side of me told me that this was all wrong, but another side of me told me I had to embrace it. I chose the second side. I embraced Rainbow and heard some d’awwws. All the ponies, except Celestia and Spike, were melting from the cuteness that was displaying itself in front of their eyes. After our little intimate moment Rainbow got off me and I tried to stand up, but realized that I couldn’t.

“It will take some time to get used to your 4 legs and your wings.” Celestia said when she saw me struggling to get up.

“Wait, what wings?” I looked at Rainbow, she grabbed the wings, that were now on my sides, and opened them, that felt good. I looked at my now opened wings, they had to be at least 2 meters in length and it seemed it was feathered, just like birds. I contracted my wings. “Do you want to do that again?” She chuckled.

“When we’re home, Casanova.” I now looked at Celestia.

“Well, now that the display is over,” I blushed a bit at that and so did Rainbow. “Let me tell you what I did to you. As you have probably realized by now, you’re a pony, a Pegasus to be exact. Because you have a relationship with Rainbow Dash, I decided to take you with us to Equestria, because I hate to break the hearts of my subjects. You shall learn how to walk and how to fly in Equestria, because we don’t have any time to lose. I will speak the spell in 5 minutes, if you need anything from your house, then ask Rainbow Dash to retrieve it.” When she said that, I looked at Rainbow and motioned her over.

“Could you get me my picture of Hugo, the picture of my parents, my bottle of Scotch and the handgun of my father?” She nodded and flew off. When Celestia heard handgun, she tried to stop her, but Rainbow was already gone. She looked at me.

“Normally weapons are forbidden in Equestria, but because it’s your father’s, I’ll let it slip this time, do you promise not to use it?”

“I promise.” She nodded and went back to preparing the spell.

After 3 minutes Rainbow was back. In her hooves were the pictures I asked, the lovely bottle of Scotch and my father’s gun. She laid everything in front of me. I now noticed that I was lying next to a mirror, I decided to see how I look. I was a light brown Pegasus with a dark brown mane and tail and brown eyes. Rainbow lay next to me and then I noticed that I was slightly taller, but I also noticed that my flank was blank, but I had time to worry about that later. I heard that Celestia was ready and I slowly crawled towards the door, wanting to see my own world for one last time. And there it was in all its glory, I watched it for a moment, a tear rolling down my cheek and looked towards Celestia, I nodded and she nodded back. I grabbed my stuff and Dash grabbed me, then I could hear the princess of the sun speak the final words. There was a huge white flash which lasted for 5 seconds. After it was gone I could see I landed on some dirt in a colorful world, a new world.

To Be Continued Here

Comments

[NotsoAwesme]

Yay happy ending!

[Dream Searcher]

722329 Stay tuned for the sequel.

[SaxtonBronyHale]

I don't know why I started to read this story. But I don't regret doing so. Good luck with the sequel.

[Dream Searcher]

722396 thanks.

[lostdarkstellan]

I realy love the two ending !! I can wait for other sequel!

[Perception Filter]

*Fluttersquee*

[Spacecore2]

2 things
1. Didn't the Princess say Jack was not able to cross the portal to equestria?
2. Didn't Rairty kiss Spike in an legitmate eppisode, they're different speices.
Can't wait for the sequel

[Dream Searcher]

730563 Thanks for noticing my mistake
1) If he was human he couldn't cross the portal, but now he's a pony.
2) That they are, but I think it's different with a human.
Maybe I will post the beginning of the sequel at the end of this month instead of August.

[Spacecore2]

730937 Oh, Thanks for the explanation that cleared a lot of the questions i had.

[Dream Searcher]

826680 I hope that's sarcasm, because he totally isn't funny.

[Dream Searcher]

826773 LOL, that has to be coincidence, i totally didn't know that, but I do like Pewdiepie. BARRELS!!

[NightmareKnight]

730937Pretty sure the whole different species thing is ignored in their world. Its a big problem in our world cuz of the media for one (don't go off on me blaming the media, just sayin that the media reports on it and then you are shunned), and also the fact that "society" doesnt accept anything other than the norm. If it's different, then it's seen as an abomination, or some other such bs.

[Menoshe]

...

Eeyup.

[Dream Searcher]

828384 I was already thinking about the sequel when I wrote that and that's how I wanted to end it. So that way the sequel is something diferent than the occasional Human In Equestira fic.

[wolfbain]

Well, what to put here... Honestly, I'm stumped, the writing was solid, the character has room to develop in the sequel BUT I hate to be the bad guy... But i found this ending REALLY cheesy and I would probably prefer the other ending if a few tweaks were made here and there, I found this an entertaining read and I look forward to the sequel which i shall start to read after outcast.

[Dream Searcher]

829991 I will correct the mistakes, Herr Grammar Nazi.
But I do appreciate your criticism and thanks for pointing out the mistakes.

[wolfbain]

830017
Dude, it's cool. I was just being a bit of a dick but I love you writing style and I see you have a lot of talent hidden there somewhere

[Zellor]

I didnt like the sad ending because it's sad. This ending however was much better

[Dream Searcher]

830209 And there's a sequel.

[Zellor]

830218 I dont thínk there is even anyway to express how happy I'm right now

[FALG]

Good fic man.
You know, at first I didn't find normal the idea of romance shipping between a human and a pony, but it's pretty good (honestly, I began laughing at the first time Rainbow and Jack kissed, because I couldn't picture a human in real life kissing an equine ). After thinking about what Jack said that ponies "are just like humans, only slightly different", it did have some sense.

Although I think two endings are a bit much, but that doesn't mean that it's bad!
I mean, there are stories that need to have the original ending. But for fans request, sometimes things have a different ending, overwriting the original or having both. There are examples but I'm not telling them in a comment.

I don't really want to be meanie criticizing something that took one big amount of work, but there's something not really concordant with time, and that's about the replicas of the ponies houses.
I haven't found any where in the second chapter that explained that building the replicas took X time, and I thought that it was still the first day because you haven't actually said otherwise. Maybe you missed that.
But anyway, just a little mistake, it can't harm anyone, I wanted to mention it so you don't do that on the next fanfic you write (that is not in production already I mean, or that is being finished).

Still, one good fic, I'm definitely reading the sequel soon!

[FALG]

Wow good fic, but you know, at first I didn't pretty much the idea of romance shipping between a human and a pony.
Honestly, I laughed at the idea (sorry), but still I kept reading to see where it would go, but when I read what Jack said about the ponies ("They're just like humans, only different") made some sense, and got used to that fact (I still find it weird though haha).

I don't want to sound mean to criticize, but I found some trouble figuring out the time lapse.
For example, when the Mane 6 and Spike got to Earth, they all created replicas of their houses (except Rainbow), since you didn't said otherwise I thought they finished the houses in the same day (and nopony can create a replica in that little time, specially Rarity with that boutique of hers).

Well, I don't find anything else I found trouble with, so now I say to you: Good job, I'm definitely reading the sequel!

[Dream Searcher]

889829 Everybody needs to stay together.

[Dream Searcher]

1093119 It's not the ending for the sequel. I used the happy end for the sequel, but I sure do love that gif.

[Dream Searcher]

1673218 Well damn.
I'm sorry for your loss.

[Tome Turner]

her friends and Spike are trapped on Earth.

Spike is not included in twilight's friends

[Dream Searcher]

3163252 Boy, this story is over a year old and I've improved since then.
I know this story is bad, you don't have to tell me that.

[Rikkity]

Yaaaaaaay......wish fulfillment.....why not a bucking earthpony?!

>.>

[Bronzer]

3165309

Because Rainbow is a pegasus, duh.

[Rikkity]

3494512

that is an all too common trope

[Bronzer]

3498637

What I mean is, since Rainbow Dash is a pegasus, making him something that can't fly with her or even step in her house would be kinda mean.

[Rikkity]

3516053

You know that twilight has a spell that can allow him to walk on clouds right? He could also have the others help him develop some mode of air travel. I know what you're thinking: "Oh but that cloud walking spell is only temporary" that's why you make it permanent.

[Bronzer]

3517172

What about the flying? Then again, if he were an earth pony, his human spirit would drive him to find a way to fly with her. Maybe he'd determinedly find/invent a way to manipulate the innate magic of earth ponies to invoke spells on himself.

So people know, evocation is a spell with an effect on something out of the caster, invocation is a spell that affects the caster. Like, a fireball is an evocation, an invisibility spell cast on yourself is an invocation.

[Dream Searcher]

3517172>>3519737 Um... as interesting as this conversation is, do you guys mind taking this elsewhere?

[Rikkity]

3519744

I don't mind. It's just this is quite entertaining xD

[Bronzer]

3519744

I'm already done.

Thank you for your patience.

[DarthChan]

Wait then how they let you sumited the story if theres mistake in it? .-.