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(SPOILERS IN STORY AND DESCRIPTION)
Wheatley is trying to get Chell to jump into the pit of nothingness, and she doesn't listen until Wheatley says a pony farm is down in the pit, so Chell jumps down and is teleported onto Applejack's farm. Not too long after, Wheatley begins to question himself what happened to Chell and POTaTOS. He ends up sending a turret named Annabelle (my character) into the pit to see what in the name of science is going on down there, when things take an unexpected twist...

Made Teen for swearing.
Edit 3/13/14:
Hey everyone! I'm going through the story and formatting now, and more chapters will be uploaded soon!
Hopefully people remember this fic...

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 63 )

I liked it!!!:pinkiehappy: Short funny and well written.

Short, but ok in my books.

Again, shor, and a bit direct.
Try lengthening it out with developement.

Quite comical.
Eh, you get a plus from me.

Go easy on me, alright?
This is my first published story! :fluttercry:
If you feel it is incomplete, then I will add another chapter, also I have no idea what to write for it! :raritydespair:

Alright, 4th chapter is coming, but please, no harsh criticism this time!
I'm a amateur writer, so go easy on me. There's worse stories out there. :pinkiesad2:

REWRITE IT ALLS BUTZ LONGURS :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

1. I only picked this because of the title picture.
2. I'm GLaD I did.
3. I can't believe I havn't done this already.
4. This is really awesome.

lol and chell's eyes are blue i think i was playing portal 2 earlier hey question can i make this in to an lps series on youtube id give you full credit and i could try and do this any ways but good story i :heart: it GO PORTAL AND PONIES lol :rainbowlaugh:

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Thank you, and from what I've read before, other fanfictions, Chell's eyes are silver/gray.... :twilightblush:
I'll change that. Thanks for the tip.:pinkiehappy:

And, sure! Go on ahead! I don't care, but answer me this: What's an lps series?

949598 Littlest pet shop and i will tell you when its out ok? You know you seem really nice and cool :yay: your welcome and i think they are like a silvery blue. Oh and im all ways trying to help you know.

941134 let me say this im an amateur writer too and im new at this and i had just posted my first story and people are being really mean to me im like give me a break im new at this the people made me cry :raritycry: and i have 14 thumbs down 2 thumbs up *looks down* i suck at writing :fluttercry: :raritycry:

POTaTOS? Nonononono. It's GLaTATO.

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Haha, no, normal pony. Twilight turned GLaTATO into a pony. Not a potato anymore, sorry. lol :derpytongue2:

This is just as good as My Little Portal: Testing is Scientific Advancment. Google it.:ajsmug:

This pleases me. I will kill you last.:coolphoto:

982504No. I don't even know who you are.

948686Chell's eye's are gray, actually.

998883 ok ill go play portal and do the thing to see the eyes i know they are a blueish gray so dude i know my portal 2 facts

999330So do I. I also have 3 copies of portal 2

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Sorry, but she isn't in there for long!

1000082 just leave me alone i don't want to argue all my bloody life because of chell's eye color

What I will do until chapter 4 comes out::derpytongue2:/:fluttercry: When it comes out::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I have an odd sense that they'll end up with a companion cube frankenturret and storage cube

CHAPTER 4 IS FINALLY HERE! :yay:
It's short, sorry about that. :fluttershysad:

1068945 Its ok.:pinkiehappy: Just continue this AWESOME story!!!:rainbowdetermined2:

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:twilightblush: Awesome? I wouldn't go that far...

1069158 dont sell youself short its a good story. but i will emit i love portal so i might be letting my love of the game mix with the story.

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Well, up next is a Spy VS. Spy crossover fic, so I have my fingers crossed for that one. :pinkiesmile:

1069186 sounds funny hey I can read through it if you like.:twilightblush:

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Dashie is gonna be in it! :rainbowwild:
But I might need someone to proofread it, maybe help me improve it before I publish.

1069205 cool and it would be my pleasure to help

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You'll help me? Wonderful! :yay:
I'll contact you when Chapter 1 is finished. :scootangel:

SO MUCH WIN!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Aw, why thank you! :twilightblush:
But I'm sure that's stretching it a bit. :twilightsmile:

GLaDOS's biggest issue is being edible and something there are hundreds of recipes for in a land of herbivores. That is an interesting idea for a spinoff fic called: The rude and Belligerent Potato.

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:rainbowlaugh:
What? I mean, okay, I see, but what?
:rainbowlaugh:

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