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Love MLP, Steven Universe and Star Vs the Forces of Evil. Also enjoying The Owl House.
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This is an unusual story, but you have a good start. Keep going.
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Thanks, I was worried that this chapter would feel kind of rushed. Don't forget Dewitt's original story made me want to recreate it, but going in a slightly different direction.
It's a shame that it's gone, but I hope to do the basic story idea justice.
Wonderful job
Humanized?
6117723 What happened to your story?
6121285 That's too bad. I liked it.
But then that means I will like this one.
Mollestia's gonna go Super Saiyan on some lucky SOB.
Why do I feel like in the end she and Johnny will get together?
Why?
Another good chapter but it could use some tender-loving editing. Not trying to be rude, just saying that it would read a lot better. Looking forward to the next!
6193652
You're right, and this is after I chose to cut some stuff out. I hope I'll have the chance to put that stuff in later, assuming I remember what that stuff was.
Hopefully I'll do a better job in future chapters.
6193049
Maybe you're a hardcore follower of cliches?
I know I am.
6194171
Hey man, just take your time, do what you've gotta do to make in shiny. If it takes an extra day or so, it's usually worth it. That's why I don't give myself rigid deadlines. I adhere to a schedule (kind of) but quality first, amirite?
But hey, you're weaving a good story together so keep it up!
6194173
Maybe or maybe because before they started talking and stuff I was like. " You're gonna marry a guy from the bar . or at least get into a relationship with him! Yaaaas hunty!"
6194183
Weaving a good story? That's giving me too much credit.
I just got a bunch of ideas in my head about how I wanted DeWitt's story to go and I'm trying to string them together.
What i think?
Sexcellent!
XDXDXD
Oh hey mystery guy....
Johnny we know its you.
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What!?!
Okay yeah it was pretty obvious.
6244554
She only gave her name away 3 times, bartender guy, Johnny, and Charlie. It ain't barboy or Charlie.
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Excuse me, the barboy's name is Isaac and he's older than Johnny, not that I clarified that but still. He has a name.
6246271
Yeah! Issac! I couldn't think of it...
I'll just remember Issac from the Love Boat. I won't forget now!
6246279
Yes! That's were I got the name!
I even thought about having Johnny doing that snapping fingers and pointing thing at Isaac just to annoy him into saying something like "I'm not that Isaac" or "I'm not doing that this is not the Love Boat" much to Johnny's disappointment or amusement.
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That would be funny!
I didn't expect Celestia to be such a chicken-shit
You built her up to be some cock-hungry maneater, but the instant she might get caught, she runs away and is ashamed and all that?
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Yeah, she was all hyped and thought it would be easy to just get down to it. But she's a princess with standards and was drunk so when the moment of truth came she panicked.
Before she gave up sex she could have it anytime she wanted. Hiding her identity and actually trying to seduce someone, rather than giving an order to a guard or an eager citizen in private, is new to her. She knows she beautiful and thought she really could just put herself out and just go through with it without a second thought.
She probably would have been better off going to Charlie's house, the bathroom thing was a spur of the moment thing, putting no thought into it and just got cold feet at the last second.
So no, as much as she wants to be, she is not quite the maneater she imagined herself to be. She's just eager to find someone and only thinks she knows what she wants or needs.
Oh, and in case you're wondering...
It's not going to get any easier for a while.
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Funny, If not for the third requirement, I'd be perfect for Celestia.
6'3" tall, I lift regularly, to the point where I can pick up 4 50 pound boxes.
I'm not going into that last one.
6566353 oh hey^^ I was beginning to believe that I am the only one who knows Chaos Legion even exists^^
Good chapter, hope to see another update soon.
I don't want to sound critical but, why do I have a feeling that Celestia can only be satisfied by a giant teddy bear with a jackhammer for a dick?
Or maybe Jonah Falcon.
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Not critical at all, that's quite possibly what's she's looking for. A bodybuilding teddy bear with that will hammer her through the bed.
That's not how you French toast.
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Your right! How did I miss that? I'll be sure to fix that before I post the next chapter.
Hmm, what should I serve her for breakfast then? I don't want to just give her cereal.
Oh what do you think about a fried bean taco? Johnny might have had a little in the fridge to mash.
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Potato pancakes? Maybe some grits? Not that there's anything wrong with a fried bean taco.
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We'll I plan to have Johnny use those potatoes later. I could just provide more potatoes, but I want him to be running out of everything.
It would be easy to just give him a couple of eggs for the french toast, but then I'd feel complied to have him make eggs with bacon and he's gonna need the bacon later as well.
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Lucky. I'm still 5'10, but I'm about that strength.
Please update.