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Since the story is currently marked incomplete, I'm guessing more chapters are coming?

6118523 Yes, this is the core idea I wanted to explore. I intend to add in a prelude, and a second chapter involving a couple more of the mane six.

Well I enjoyed this and I can't think of anything you really need to improve so far. I have to ask though, what did you mean by one sided lesbianism, does that mean that Lotus and Aloe are straight?

6118723 Aloe and Lotus are not receiving any sex back from Rarity. Or something like that.

Okay that makes sense. Guess I read it wrong.

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