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Chaosreverent

Chaosreverent #1 · Jun 21st, 2015 · · · Chapter X ·

Since the story is currently marked incomplete, I'm guessing more chapters are coming?

TGnPT

TGnPT #2 · Jun 21st, 2015 · · · Chapter X ·

6118523 Yes, this is the core idea I wanted to explore. I intend to add in a prelude, and a second chapter involving a couple more of the mane six.

Smirkythread

Smirkythread #3 · Jun 21st, 2015 · · · Chapter X ·

Well I enjoyed this and I can't think of anything you really need to improve so far. I have to ask though, what did you mean by one sided lesbianism, does that mean that Lotus and Aloe are straight?

TGnPT