Wow, heart warming and twisted all in one. I LIKE IT!

Still wondering what happened to spike, hes the only one i cant account for with entire certainty, and I not thinking he is the one i am unassuming is the transforming i note running about. ( i guess it is a transforming type of creature, the kid and the celestia.)

I don't recall shining armor whereabouts
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6807803 I thought i say Cadence said he died...i might be mistaking it with another story though.

6807803 Still in the Crystal empire, Guarding it from the corruption in Eqestria like a boss.

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No, you did not express that there must be some deeper plot at work. You took what you were being shown at face value and complained about it in as demoralizing a way as possible. Citing that you hated everybody and felt you should just stop reading. As if it was all a waste of your time. And then you 'kinda' apologized for it.

Dude, you came across as a troll. And once I determined that for myself I stopped interacting with you. I don't feed trolls. You made a bunch of provocative statements and ignored what you wished in the responses you received. And you're now lamenting and drawing attention to the fact that some reader downvoted your apology as if a random anonymous voting system deserves a second glance. I can almost hear the sad violin music playing. This appears to me to also be trollish attention seeking behavior so you're doing nothing to change my opinion.

This is the last crumb I feed you until I have some evidence that you don't live under bridges.

Well, I almost hoped there will be no sex. Well, there was almost no sex
Nice chapter tho, like a breath of frash air

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What? Hoping for no clop? In something that was been written by me? Well, originally this chapter had a lot more clop, about 3k words worth. But we decided to cut the chapter into two because it was so big. So they next one is going to be about 50% clop in two separate scenes.

>Gold4tune Well, yeah, this chapter was so cute, some roque thoughts started forming in my head Glad to hear there will be more

I love this story so damn much!

I'll be there to stop it." He hooves were spending a little more time on his plot than necessary,
her not he

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I'm sorry you feel that way. No, that wasn't my intent at all. And what I meant with the comment first and foremost was that the Nobles didn't have any characterisation that put them in a different category than the one you mentioned:

nothing but villainous cliche and spite with not a brain to share between them that might make them really dangerous.

I wasn't trying to troll. I did say I liked the story. It's got my upvote. I did say which parts I found done well. And I did apologise and meant it.

You can leave the violin where you found it. If you really, honestly, want me gone, I'll go and take my opinions along. They're obviously not what you were looking for anyway. And I don't mean that in a "you can't handle criticism!" way, but that if communication broke down this bad, then perhaps there's just no way I can say anything useful for you.

The very last thing I wanted was to come across as a troll. I didn't think I was trolling. If that's what it seemed I was doing, again, I'm sorry. I messed up.

I would have a followup question, but I'm afraid it might look like trying to stir up more trouble, which I didn't want in the first place and don't want now. Would it be okay to ask you in a PM or should I post it here?

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PM me if you would like, we can discuss this privately.

I... honestly don't know what to feel about this.

6821627 Fel Equestria: Making people question their sexuality and kinks since 2015.

6822224 oh hadeharhar.

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Well, in my opinion. "Turned on", "excited for the next chapter", "that this is some amazing writing" are all acceptable answers

6825305 No, just. No.

i have to say i like this story. and not cause of the clop. ^_^
i love the idea of using something evil for good. ^_^ look at my name after all. most people consider darkness evil but i know that its just as good as the light.

Came for the plot. Stayed for the story. Great fic, one of the bests.

This is one of the reasons why I like your story.
It's so rare to see a good clop fic with an actual story, one with a GOOD story like this one?
Good work.