Sweetie Belle plans a special birthday surprise for Rarity, but no one is able to come. How can she show her love for Rarity?
I'm not super happy with this story, and it could probably use a few rewrites.
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The beginning is mostly just the beginning of Sisterhooves Social.
Other than that, it's a fun look at the relationship between Sweetie Belle and Rarity, who are the most interesting family in the show (in my opinion).
Nice story, I wish you had come up with lyrics for the song, but it was good nonetheless. Angel with party hat lolz
Very nice. You may want to be a bit more descriptive, however. In the scene with Fluttershy, I thought they were at her cottage.
Apple Bloom
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Cap.
And are you serious?, with all the lies, deception, and manipulation she does on the show. She's a master liar. It's practically her 'other' specal talent.
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Already commented on the use of Ah and Apple Bloom in a different fic of yours. Again sorry for how I came across after my Tabby crashed and erased everything. Really did sound like an 455. Anywho, decent fic. The first half as mentioned by someoneelse did feel like the Sisterhooves Social, but the other half was kinda cute. Although you might want to be a tad more descrpitive on where Sweets met Flutters.
Sister being there for a sister.
My only complaint is I waited far too long to read this masterpiece.