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Coltured


I am a Creative Writing undergrad major in college, but I am still new to the realm of fanfiction. Therefore, I don't hold any kind of false pride because my major is English.

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On the exciting Hearts and Hooves Day, Pinkie Pie strikes a curious conversation with Lyra. After that, she starts follows Lyra, who is obviously up to something. It looks like she's making a gift for somepony, but it also looks like a big project.

This is just a story version of a potential MLP episode I had in mind. There might not be enough content for a full episode, though. I also should've wrote this story around Hearts and Hooves Day, but *shrug*.

Also, I wrote song lyrics in it. I don't know if that's a thing in FiMfics or if it's too weird, but it happened and I regret nothing.

As you might be able to tell, I'm relatively new to FiMfics, so any critique or advice is appreciated.

Thanks for reading!

Shocked Lyra vector drawing credit to MillennialDan http://millennialdan.deviantart.com/

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Comments ( 8 )

A sweet little story:twilightsmile:

Thank you! :pinkiehappy: That makes me really happy

Great story but ..... I'm not sure if a lesbian relationship is good for 3-5 year old girls. No offense or anything

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And thus the controversy. It's probably why they stayed just "friends" in the 100th episode; they didn't want to cause another derpy-sized uproar. I personally think if they get the guts to show a lesbian/homosexual relationship on a kids show like that, it would help teach a future generation that all kinds of love is acceptable.

6105698 True now that I think about it that way. Personally I'm not a huge fan Homosexual love and all but thats also because I'm a cristian. This story could definitly be a good "Hearts and Hooves" day episode.

6106566 Gotcha. And thank you :yay:

Hello! I'm sad you didn't stick around for more than six days, as I quite enjoyed this. A little rough in places, eg Pinkie feels more S1 than S5, but this shows plenty of potential that I wish we'd seen realised in ponyfic. Here's a review for anyone who passes by.

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