After "Magical Duel", Trixie returned to Ponyvile and has had countless duels with her rival, Twilight, but after a time, Trixie decides that she and Twilight should stop pretending to fight and let their hidden feelings out, letting their love blossom so that they can live happily in each others embrace.
Twilight was not aware of any of these feelings.
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Just in case a Soundproofing spell should be casted.
6095921 I really hoped that this was part of the actual story. Darn.
6096172 To be honest, I was tempted to edit it into the story.
6096178 It would've added a nice dose of randomness, but it also would have taken away from the plot. I love that line, but this story is great as it is. Good job.
6096194 Thanks.
6095921 I really don't care for Spike and kinda choose to ignore him, but I like your portrayal of him.
6095851 But then how are Rarity and Fluttershy supposed to listen in?
6096244 I was worried about Spike.
Silly and cute. I like it.
This is so silly, but yet so good. I love it
6096356 nobody care about spike, not even spike himself
6096356 What Vlaarith said.
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Don't let anyone pressure you into tacking Spike onto a story that has no focus on him. You'll quickly find there's a fairly large cult dedicated to Spike on this site, due to too many people projecting themselves onto the character and thus take offense at any story where he's not present just because he conceivably could be. They'll whip up any reasoning, and get more and more ridiculous if you entertain their disagreements. I remember one time there was a cluster of about five people bitching about a lack of Spike on a Vinyltavia shipfic set in Manehattan. Likewise, most don't seem to realize or care that Spike is not a main character (canon references: Just for Sidekicks, and Slice of Life), and that most stories don't mention or prominently feature characters who do not add to the story in some way - so what they're actually arguing is that you didn't give Spike a meaningful part and make him a main focus of the story, in truth.
They will spin such lies and broken logic to sound justified. Resist, I say! No one can tell you to add a character to a story you don't want to!
Capital T on 'twilight'.
"as"?
Nice little story. Though Twilight would probably benefit from taking that time to think about it...
6097888 If it hadn't been for Spike, The Crystal Empire would've been crushed!
bow chicka wow wow
And her comes Aurora Fucking Dimmit, "heroically" barging in with a whole goddamn paragraph spilling out of him, simply because one user pointed out [humorously] that a character's entire social circle has gathered in his home while he remains unaccounted for. The fucker is an Anti-Spike Justice Warrior Justice Warrior, even when there's only a small hint of SJW-like behavior.
I don't think you can be a "social justice warrior" for a single fictional character, even if you tried.
Also, I suppose that was... alright-ish, I guess. The idea is funny, but you didn't actually do anything funny with it. No interesting snark from the other characters, not much in the way of humorous and awkward situations or deflections. Honestly, it feels more like it's played almostly completely straight. Remove the comedy tag from the story and I don't think people would even notice that it was ever supposed to be.
Giggled from the beginning to the end. And left me wanting for more.
The chase rather reminds me of the old Pepe le Pew cartoons.
Adorable and funny. I want more XD