First and foremost, I'm not that great a writer. I'm awesome. There really isn't much to me.
This story is a sequel to Twilight Becomes a Dazzling
During the initial Battle of The Bands finals, the Rainbooms and Sunset failed to save their friend. Now a few days later they aim to get her back no matter what, with the help of an old ally. Will they get her back, will Twilight stay a Dazzling, will the Dazzlings conquer the world?
(I'm no good at this)
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Well so far so good, Twilight Lightning. And don't say you're not good at it, have courage and stop doubting yourself. No Bullsh*t!
All you have to do, when you have problems trying to get an idea, is try getting others to help you. That would make things easy for ya! 
Now back to my thoughts about this Story:
Whoa!
Looks like Starswirl The Bearded is in the Human World too! Now this story IS making me Hype, I can't wait to see what will happen next! 
Perfect Job, TL! Good Luck & Keep it up!
(And don't forget what I said, my man. You're not the only person who has to work on this story on your own.
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Aaaaand you jumped the shark, I liked the prequel story but this... I wish you luck.
Well it looks they're all going to the Portal (Most likely just Sunset & Spike.....I think. I don't know. I NEED HELP!) back to Equestria to think of a plan to, hopefully, save Twilight and bring her back to her normal Alicorn pony self again!
Let's hope they can get pass the under controlled students. If it doesn't go well, let's just hope for the best later on. 
Twilight Lightning, Good Luck on the next chapter. And Great job on this too!
YES YOU ARE, APPLEJACK! YOU ARE IMMUNE TO AN APOCALYPSE! WHAT ARE THEN, HOBOS?!
Wonderful. So wonderful...
rip
Someone please tell me this amazing story is going to be continued
this is a joke right?
please continue
Knowing twilight and knowing who is the captive, I don't think she'll let the others hurt him, but will torture him with endless questions.
RIP This Story died atleast give us a end