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Fallout Equestria Firestorm

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Sir Leadhead

Sir Leadhead #1 · Aug 9th, 2012 · · · Once more into the Wasteland ·

fav'd, downloaded, I'll give it a go Looks like it could be a good one from the description. It's not as if I need another FoE side story to read anyways... I think this would be number 15... lol

Anywho, keep it up! Be sure to plug yourself at http://fallout-equestria.com/chat# whole group of fans willing to jump on a new fic and give advice and encouragement.

Dear mother of Celestia, two words. QUOTATION MARKS. I don't care if it's in journal format, you really, really need quotation marks around dialogue to set it apart from descriptions and thoughts, otherwise things are gonna get hella confusing.

Just some friendly advice.

Ulfhunden

Ulfhunden #2 · Aug 9th, 2012 · · · Once more into the Wasteland ·

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Thanks for the advice, I'll start putting quotations into chapter five now and do the rest later, dialogue between characters has always been one of my weak points.