My cutie mark

My cutie mark appeared today. It is a pair of black angel wings. I hate it. I am an earth pony so can never fly yet that is what my cutie mark is telling me. Or is it...

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The Gaming Commitee

The Gaming Commitee #1 · Jun 13th, 2015 · 2 · 1 ·

This was... bad to be honest. You could stretch this out into multiple chapters, get an editor if you have to. The pacing was a bit off.

3/10 for effort

Minecraftmaz61

Minecraftmaz61 #2 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · ·

6088491 first story so it was a bit of an experiment will take on your advice and try to write something better

Lazydrill

Lazydrill #3 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · ·

I have to say as well, that this feels more like some sort of dark/depressive poem, not an actual story. Nothing more to say actually.

Although, I give it to you for giving it a shot.

Baraka Obama

Baraka Obama #4 · Jun 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

this seems like something Edgar Allan Poe would write in his spare time

Honeypelt945

Honeypelt945 #5 · Jun 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Why so many downvotes? This is awesome.

The_Light_Is_Dying

The_Light_Is_Dying #6 · Jun 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I like it. It's different then anything I've ever read (or wrote)...

Minecraftmaz61

Minecraftmaz61 #7 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · ·

6088862 thanks. I tried to write something different and this is what happened

The_Light_Is_Dying

The_Light_Is_Dying #8 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · ·

6089087 Well, I quite enjoyed it. I like to read things that are different from what I normally read. This is amazing and a great addition to this community.

Minecraftmaz61