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SevenVenom


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Ponies and Starcraft, my to favorite things!
Pity the fic isn't too good though.
Try slowing down your exposition a little, and using more commas. The whole thing just kind of whizzes past at 100 mph.
Also, get a pre-reader/grammar checker.

This was strangely hypnotic. :applejackconfused:
That being said, you might want to brake down on your pace. It's moving a bit quickly as is.

Sorry if you some of you guys had trouble reading it.
I'll take the advice and put it into something else when I make another.

SHE JUST GOT ZERGGED!:rainbowdetermined2:

"She waved her hand"
:facehoof:
It was nice if a bit fast

Zerg Rush!!!
KEKEKEKEKEKEKE

ZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGG RRRRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Fear the zerg rush Twilight. Fear it

Yay for zerg rush!
One thing though... Twilight passing up a chance to read the instructions and tutorials??[??/i] that's insanity. :twilightoops:

625536 I have to agree.
But I have a two things to say about it.
1. This was based on a true story. :raritydespair:
2. She was confused about the whole computer thing. She was expecting a manual or a book or a guide, rather than a screen. I'll put that in.

626467
Just so you know, it's C-14 IMPALER Gauss Rifle
and are you basing this in SC1 or SC2?
cause if it is SC1 it's C-13 Impaler Gauss Rifle

I really liked this fic. Hm, if i get sense that ground is rumbling i might as well use "ZERG RUSH!" line. :rainbowlaugh:
Or actually not, having poker face makes things boring. :ajbemused:
Yet still, kinda want to use that now.
Did you read this? http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3654/My-little-Pony%3A-Friendship-is-Starcraft-2

This was utter brilliance.

First off, this I could see actually happening. Probably not the Game itself, but the overall plot. I can see this happening.

You make the characters still believable, and that's hard to pull off.

So this fic is going in the collection of stories I love. Congratz.

dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

738319 This is what you get from criticism. :moustache:

And yes making the characters believable was honestly a challenge for me.

The oneshot theme really helped pull me pull it out of the ground.

738335 Believe me, if I wanted to REALLY critique this, I could.

Let's just say thanks to Stalin and me talking on Skype, I've opened up my new hobby: "Gamerviews".

Basically, I take the review, as If I'm playing a game, putting in pics and music that are appropriate.

After that? I basically put in what I like, didnt care for, and give it a rating, from "Geon's Royal Approval" to "Game of Horrors." Or something along that line. XD

THANKS STALIN.

:P i say BROODLING RUSH Useless rush though D:! they all die in three seconds

My friend tried to Zerg Rush me...
Then he figgured out I ALWAYS get battlecruisers early.
I also had a giant hidden army in the corner of the map that he did not find till I sent 5 Battlecruisers, 6 Thors, 15 Hellions, over 50 Marines and Marauders, a Medivac, and a SVC that somehow snuck into his base and took out his Spawning Pool before he noticed to defeat him. He took out all of my things except for that SCV, so if my attack failed, I still could REBUILD!!!
Next tactic...
SEIGE TANK WALL!!!!
He's gonna hate me...

KEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKEKE

DIE YOU BUGS!!!:flutterrage:

Silly SC2 peoples...Twilight isn't being chased by a zerg in that pic...that's a Tyranid, more specifically a Termigaunt. The Granddaddy of all Zerg

Oooh, shoulda built Siege Tanks.

and found what seemed like a construction sight
and observed her surrounded and noticed a large purple dome
and started attacking the marine The marine attacked back
including the one that was attacked by the zergling and send them off
She screamed as the rest of the zerglings began disassembled her
was visible in the sky meaning ti was night time
Suddenly, the library door bursted open with Pinkie Pie

1. Site.
2. Surroundings.
3. Forgot your full stop near the middle.
4. Sent.
5. Disassembling.
6. It.
7. Burst.

Least Pinkie didn't 6pool, losing to late game Zerg rush is much more bearable.

Also BattleNet time is always inexplicably faster:pinkiecrazy:

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