Somehow, I manage to write sad fluff. I'd be concerned about my mental health, but I'm too busy writing.
The Moon rises slowly, taking its time as it brings its silver light to the night of Equestria.
But the Sun rises quickly.
Why? Nobody but the Princesses know. Some say it's because Celestia's been raising the Sun for thousands of years. Some say that it's because she has amazing magical power.
However, none hit upon the real reason.
The Sun rises quickly simply because Celestia is not a morning pony.
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I loved this!
Also, when the hell does Luna sleep?
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This story's going off the basis that she's nocturnal, so Sun-Butt's get-up time is her bedtime. However, she isn't adverse to pulling an 'all-dayer' once in a while to help out her sister.
Like some sort of cosmic Joke, a mean one :P
Though to be fair its Ponyville. If it isn't attack by something or facing some kind of crisis. Also, like mentor like student.
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Grammar score out of 10: 10, noticed no issues.
Pros: I like how somebody did a fic about how Celestia must feel about the morning.
It was a little unusual to hear her yell at a group of Zebras than just leave. Funny, still.
Cons: I get that Celestia is obviously not a morning pony, but that was still mean to yell at Luna, besides I wanted to know about what she wanted to say.
This is a quirk of mine that I'm not exempt from doing but...mugs really don't make sense for ponies if you think about it for a minute. Lifting it with their mouth or a straw could suffice.
What was the thing attacking?
And you made a slight mistake on who could be the worst pony to wake up in the morning: that would be a tie between Twilight and maybe Rarity, little hard to decide.
Enjoy your review! Please help me out by looking at my story:https://www.fimfiction.net/story/263561/everfree-incident May not make sense really seeing as this is branch off of a story that's a sequel to my first story.
That was one of the greatest interactions I've ever seen between Lulu and Tia. Thank you so much for creating such a tender and sweet moment.
Oh I know this feeling all too well !!!!...
Worst part is I don't drink coffee much...lol
No-one likes waking up.
How do you do that? The middle feather? What?
Sunset? I can't see Twilight bunking with Celestia. Maybe...her own child?
The Moon knows nothing but calm.
The okapi, lovers of the night, have a song:
Buck the sun! Buck the sun!
One! Two! Three! Four!
C'mon everybody, buck the sun!
One! Two Three! Four!
"Yes, O Princess?" A unicorn, Closing quotation marks. Also,
SCREW OFF! IT'S TOO EARLY FOR YOUR CRAP!
I would like tea with my sugar as well.
Of course when Luna snaps and wants attention, she deserves to be banished for a thousand years. Reeal consistent Princess.
Maybe a career change would help with that?
But they already have Cadance's face on them, I don't want her eyes following me everywhere.
Better call Saul.
I won't let you mine at night, nothing I can do past that.
6082688 Today's that day of Episode 100, whatever monster they fight today and whatever it does is the one Applejack is warning her about.
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You're right! It totally was Sunset!
It wasn't like I originally intended for it to be Twilight's bed that she used as a filly or anything. I had the really cool and better than the original idea for Celestia to still have Sunset's bed in her room on my own. That was my idea.
Totally.
Yeah.
...All me.
I like it.
Boom? Boom!
6090395 Am I sensing some reasonably priced sarcasm here? Delightful.
I went into this thinking i'd get a funny slice of life, but this was actually incredibly heartwarming and amazingly well done.
6093880 You don't think I should roll back the attitude a bit?
6096183 New best pony.
6081282 SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK
I agree with Celestia I am NOT a morning person.
Good morning, day, goor morning, sun, good morning.morning, y´all
I can relate to that
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No, sleep is for a week, if one is tired enough...
Not Twilight I feel. It feels like longer than she's been alive. Same with Sunset. Plus I can't ever see her doing this even when she was good. Too stuburn.
Me thinks it's for somepony else you'll never tell us about.