YO! I write stuff. Primarily comedy for now but I will experiment with other genre's. some will go better that others.
A Foreign Queen brings her son with her to Equestria, in hopes of him maybe meeting a nice mare because tonight is the Grand Galloping Gala. Unfortunately, he wants nothing more then to get this over with and go home because despite his looks, romance is a waste of time for him. Will he find his one true love? Oneshot
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>"eh, I'll get off 4chan later"
>6 hours later...
>"alright, let me just finish reading this greentext..."
>the next day...
>"alright, more ylyl and cringe thread
the cycle continues...
So you lure me in with a hilarious title, and then you drop 15,000 words on me. I'm not even sure what to say. At first, I thought it was going to be a lighthearted satire on terrible OC's and maybe something else, but I guess it's secretly an epic. I mean, epic for a comedy such as this.
6077391 well originaly it was going to be a Tony stark as a pony paradoy hence the title but it kinda just shifted a bit.
I didn't know how to write an OC that was a likeable jerk so...yeah.
I think the amount of Technology Prince Tony err prince RAY invested by himself is a little TOO extensive, he invented radio AND power armor? Sorry I could see him creating lots of basic tech OR lots of advanced tech not both. I don't think he would have invented anything until he was at least 7 and 12 years does not seem long enough to go from transistor radios to advanced strength enhancing power armor and jet thrusters. Someone else would have to set the foundations of at least some of the technology for him to build on.
It's cute. I loved how you displayed it. I hope there's a sequal to this.
This storie must hâve à sequel
6111775 eventually. I know exactly what it would be but Ill be busy for a while
Would love to see this made into a multi-chapter series one day.
6356823 that's actually what it was supposed to be but, i have too many ongoing stories right now sooo yeah.
I presume your referring to cave Johnson? And if Ray invented all this futuristic tech and his mom mentioned this father did the same... could Ray be Pony Stark's (Tony Stark's) son? And that could explain how Ray got the inspiration for power armor...
6077682 maybe Pony Stark left some unfinished inventions behind (left a foundation) and all Ray had to do was finish them for his breakthroughs.
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That's pretty much my point, he would of had to stand on the shoulders of other inventors not created it ALL himself. NO real or fictional Genius has ever created all technologies in there world, they create significant ones and adapt the ideas of others. Tomas Edison for example did NOT Invert the light bulb for example, he created a better filament for longer lasting better light bulbs, improving an existing technology to be practical. Even Tony Stark created all his tech based on things others made, he just made better versions or used them in innovative ways.
6880757 Precisely!
Is this story gonna have a sequel?
7460435 probably not. i plan to use Ray and the eclipse empire in another story
7461342 will it be like the aftermath or backstory/prequel?
7461618 using the eclipse empire back story. Ray and his kingdom will exist in my OC's story. It will be a little different though.
7467249 what will be different?
7467256 just a few small details here and there may or may not include his mother.