The magic of friendship depends on the primary five Elements combining to create the spark of magic that is the sixth. When Twilight feels alone, isolated and depressed, not to mention pressurised by having the fate of Equestria permanently in her hooves, she loses control of her emotions, with disastrous results.
Consumed by shadow, can her friends get back the Twilight they know and love, or is Equestria doomed forever?
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Author's note:
This is my second fan-fic. Rather than the short and sweet nature of my one-shot 'Imagine', I decided to try a multi-chapter story. My fics aren't the best things in the world by any stretch of the imagination, but I had so much fun writing this and I loved the experience. If just one person enjoyed it, then that's a bonus. As for my next project... well, we'll see how the mood takes me. Hopefully I'll write a new fic soon, as I have a looong summer ahead, and I really would love to write another. Also, while I remember, a big thanks to my lovely sister and pre-reader.
Thanks for reading.
Love the ideas you present, such as Lyra's cat being named Mittens, but I could barely get into the first chapter on account of the WALL OF TEXT
I crashed my car into it, it was so sudden. Need a new windshield. Maybe this could be fixed? I'll give it a further read-through afterwards.
I enjoyed it. Nice pass-time whilst I was waiting for my PS3 to cooldown.
Nice and short review for you: The concept is good, and you are a decent writer. A few grammar errors here and there, and of course the massive walls of text (big problem).
Overall, good fic. I'd give it a 3.9/5 if I could.
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I'd buy everyone new metaphorical windshields, but I'm out of metaphorical money, so that won't be possible. Hopefully the walls of text are a bit more manageable now though. Sorry.
It was something that literally did not occur to me as I read through the first time. Or the second. Or the third. Apparently I'm dim.
Thanks for giving up your time to read (or not if the wall of text put you off) and comment. It makes me happy.
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It's cool. I read it all, and enjoyed it like I already said.
You're text is more manageable now. Consider yourself watched by me, because I feel generous and you seem to be a decent writer with some potential. ;)
Lol at the Twilight reference, and the fourth wall part.
Really enjoyed this story. only thing that bothered me was the anyone parts, since they say anypony all the time cept once. LOL That was a very nice ending and the letter was very believable. Loved that she is accepting that she has got to change for the better. Thumbs up!
Watch too. 