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The Killer Legacy
Just a normal brazilian brony who starts writing stories after a dream he had.
The Killer Legacy
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So, it's finally been accepted? Good.
A good attempt at capturing the spirit of babysitting three foals. It was an interesting read.
The only issue I could see that could be fixed is the pacing. It might be wise to pad out your story with a bit of descriptive details. Take the time to describe the situation or environment the characters are in and readers will have an easier time to keep up with the story. Have too quick of a pace and readers will be discouraged and might not follow along the entire way.
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Good advice, thanks.
But how I said, this story was based on a dream I had. I just wanted post it here regardless of the people will like or dislike here.
My next stories will focus more on that because I will be able to modify them, but you can't modify a dream you already had.
Fantastic, my friend! Fantastic! Definitely getting a like and favorite!
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Thanks my friend!
6676641 You're very welcome.
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Believe it was a dream I had?
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Yes, actually.
you had a dream about an oc pony being ab/dl'd?....
neat.....
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I think you got confused. Biscoito isn't an AB/DL, she is just a baby.
6687526 then why is this rated m?....
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Moderation request. (I dont get the point too)
...
Good?