When Spike and Twilight spend some time together after announcing their feelings to each other, Twilight learns something about Spike's body that she never knew when things get closer...
able to cook much more then simple snack foods his voice higher-pitched then normal he was indeed bearing his heart and soul to her no matter the cost , only for
1. Than. 2. Than. 3. Baring, in this case which would mean to open up to. 5. Just an extra spacing.
Sorry but the whole first chapter felt so cheese I couldn't stop picturing the two of them on a bad stage overdramaticly shouting out lines at the audience. I'll give chapter two a shot but I really don't see sticking around if the story is being as subtle and believable as a foam mallet.
I am not sure what to think of this... sure, they arn't blood related but the age gap and the whole twilight brought up spike thing.
I'm glad twilight never tried anything but even with spike intiating its rather uncomfortable to read.
Sorry, this ones not for me.
It's getting very interesting.. I'm lovin' it xD
I shall keep reading!
able to cook much more then simple snack foods
his voice higher-pitched then normal
he was indeed bearing his heart and soul to her
no matter the cost , only for
1. Than.
2. Than.
3. Baring, in this case which would mean to open up to.
5. Just an extra spacing.
Sorry but the whole first chapter felt so cheese I couldn't stop picturing the two of them on a bad stage overdramaticly shouting out lines at the audience. I'll give chapter two a shot but I really don't see sticking around if the story is being as subtle and believable as a foam mallet.
Reptile tongues are awesome!
I'm digging on it. I'll keep reading!
Need to edit this to "Alicorn" as you show later on that she is indeed an Alicorn princess with wings flaring and all that.