How did Applejack's parents meet?
A one-shot that was written at 11:30 at night. Yes I know, I am a weakling for being tired at this time. No, I don't care at all that you care.
Teen for very strong insinuations.
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I'm a huge nerd, I confess, I'm just a goofy, awkward mess.
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This has more than enough potential to turn into a full-on story rather than a one shot, well done!
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Rainbow Dash is still best pony though.
It wasn't crappy. It just needs a little more work. I like how you made Apple Jack's mother a wanderer from home like Apple Jack once was.
6089241 I'll be honest I didn't even think about that. Tired works in mysterious ways!
Pretty much what they said. It was short, almost too short. But it was nice.
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It was... nice. HAHA REFERENCES THAT EVERYONE GETS!!! But thanks! I appreciate it. Also quick question: Do you think I should make a sequel to this, continue/revise this story, or just leave as is?
Feedback plz?
6424390 I've written a short story and I managed to wrap it up in about 3 chapters (technically the last was a tiny chapter).
I feel like you could maybe flesh this chapter out a bit more, but you could definitely add another chapter or maybe two. I don't mind one shots but this one shot felt like half a shot. I came to the end and I was like "HUH? It's done already. That was fast."
I do like how to give the impression that Haralson is definitely kind but he's also not the pushover "here let me help you, now I'll leave and let you fall in love with me because I'm just a nice guy" type. He's a bit of a rapscallion but he's an honest hardworking one.
6424666 Thanks! I shall take all this into consideration.
You're welcome.
Now if you'll excuse me I've got homework to do. Yay! *sarcasm*