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What are the words that touch the heart?

Well, it depends on each heart...

Applejack tried several times to express her feelings, but only through the right words, she managed to let her lover go.

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7015810 It's a farewell letter. It's quite simple to understand. :twistnerd:

7015817 No, it's not. The whole thing feels like it's some huge metaphor, like Rainbiw cheated on her or died or something.

I'm going to be honest—I had an easier time coping with the death of my cat than following this.

7015834 I understand your point, it may be easy for me to understand, since I wrote it. But people are free to interpret the story in whatever way they which.

Yes, it has a lot of metaphors, but for me it feels like a farewell of sorts. (The reasons for such a thing are up to the reader though)

I hope you find a meaning that works for you. :twilightsmile:

7015849 Not really. I couldn't find anything that worked for me. Not something I could decipher, not something I could relate to—nothing.

7015860 Then I feel sorry for you. Maybe another story will turn the hinges in your mind. Have a great day.

7015864 I don't know why, but this comment seems very rude.

And if that's what you were going for, well then Fu2, buddy.

7015870 Well, I'm never rude to anyone. I don't get why you're trying to argue with me right here and now.

I just said that if you don't like the story, you are free to find another one that works with your emotions, that's all.

Don't let the world out there change the way you see people. Not everyone is trying to offend you.

As I said before, have a great day.

Nice letter, with some good turns of phrase. Nicely deals with what would be an issue with both Rarity and RD... they've got definite goals for their life, and trying to reconcile that for a relationship with someone who is very bound to where they're at, well, it would definitely be something that needs resolving. And enough of the time, the resolution won't be the happily ever after couples one.

Not really feeling it as coming from AJ though, probably because i imagine her to be a bit more straightforward, rather than to wax poetic. But it could just as easily come from some other farmer, about whom I have no preconceived notions, and then it works well.

Also, one little typo in your short description:

Applejack decided to write a letter, a letter to put and end on something that should never be started.

That should be 'an', I believe.

Hey bud, I thought this was pretty deep. I was reading this while listening to this.

In my opinion this music makes this fic pop. Don't know why. Anyway good job.

Never been a big fan of Rainbow X Applejack, but it was an ok story.

7015929 Yes, I'm leaving it open to interpretations, it's like music; if the musician revealed the meaning behind some lyrics, he would ruin the meaning that many other listeners gave to said lyric.

And thank you for pointing out the typo. :twilightsmile:

7015942 Thanks bro. Amazing version of an amazing song. :ajsmug:

7016226 Your presence here is enough to make me happy, Corey.

Damn that touched my heart

Why did you add this to the Straight Shipping group? It's quite obviously an AppleDash story. It was an alright story, don't get me wrong, I'm just curious. :rainbowhuh:

7018013 Ops, I guess it was a mistake. My bad, I was probably adding another story of mine. Is there a way to remove?

7018017 I think there should be a recycle bin next to the story's name where ever it is in the group. I think it was under Applejack. So long as you're the one who added it anyway.

7018052 Oh, alright then, thanks for informing! :twilightsmile:

Sad story. Really enjoyed it! :heart:

:pinkiesad2: I has a really big sad now a REALLY big sad. well done my friend well done

7081721 Thank you, I guess. :twistnerd:

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