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Rarity and Fluttershy are closer to each other than with anypony else, they're truly the best of friends. But during their usual get-together day, strange feelings sprout within Rarity. Is it... love?

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Enjoy this lovely oneshot. (My first work with Romance fics.)
Title inspired by The Beatles song: I Saw Her Standing There

:raritywink:

good story :yay:

Someone downvoted. ERROR.

Really though, this is a cute little story, and though it had its share of spelling and grammatical errors it still brought home the gold. Well done.


I've been noticing a large increase in RariShy fics on this site. Funny, that.

nicely done :twilightsmile:, tho I ain't a shipping fan
honestly not sure why I came here:derpyderp2:
Oh, right, The Beatles:rainbowkiss:

Glad to see another Fluttershy and Rarity fic up here! :yay::raritywink:

*D'aww Explosion*

Yay! Very cute story. Went a little fast for my liking, guess I just love that drama, but I still thoroughly enjoyed it! Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

4 downvotes?
They must've hit the wrong button...

BR

VIVA...LAS PEGASUS!

615360 What is this?
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Also this story, so much daw.

Cute little story. It did have a couple minor errors though, and the writing seemed a bit awkward at times.

The story had plenty of charm though, so you get 4 out of 6 Fluttershys and a like. :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay:

THIS!.... is Beautiful! *Manly tears are being shed today*

I LOVED all the Beatles references.

that was such a cute story :twilightsmile: i love rarityxfluttershy <3 soo cuteeee :rainbowkiss:

I liked the story a lot but the pacing feels a bit fast. I'd suggest less page breaks too. They came up often and some felt a bit unnecessary. Some of the actions seem a bit off too, because of how unlike the character they can be, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It's just weird to see Fluttershy so assertive, esp the kiss, and Rarity to be so coy. Overall great work though, keep it up! :moustache:

Fluttershy forgot who wrote "All You Need is Love"!? Someone give her all of the Beatles albums!

I only have one issue with this story. Where did sweetie bell go? She's my favorite Cutie Mark Crusader. Loved the story btw.

The cuteness, it's OVERLOADING HNNNNGGG

flarity and beatles; so much win

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: I LOVE IT! :yay: :raritywink:

when they were discussing love being more important than money, the song all you need is love a different song came into my head and wont go out

for i don't care too much for money
cause money cant buy me love
cant buy me love
everybody tells me so
cant buy me love
no no no no!
tell me you don't need no diamond ring
and i'll be satisfied
tell me that you want the kind of things
that money just cant buy
cause i don't care too much for money
for money cant buy me love
cant buy me love

and that's all i know of the song off the top of my head....

but this story was just so dawful

i love tis pairing and you do it ever so perfectly

"But… but… I’m the one who…"
This was Rarity's brain:
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AWesome! Cute and too the point

693915
Heh, if you liked this one, I'd recommend you read my other fic Rarity's Bad Mane Day. :raritywink:

694099
but it's not shipping :(

697312
Do it anyway, that fic is hilarious :pinkiehappy:

ALSO:
This fic, could be better, could be a heck of a lot worse. What's up with the lemon juice? That just stood out to me, in a funny way.
"Fluttershy nibbled on her mushrooms, drinking some of her lemon juice with a straw. The juice was a bit sour, but she didn’t mind."
YA THINK? :derpyderp1:

This is probably the best Flarity fic I've ever read.

Nice job. :pinkiehappy:

Pacing was a little quick, but this is a one shot. Feelings were definitely there. Good fic. Nicely done.

Just right for a one-shot. No clop, no threats to all of Equestria. Unless you count what Angel will do when he finds out he'll have to share Fluttershy's attention with Rarity. Well done and to your credit, believable.

Gimme a sec, gotta go check for diabeetes.

All my d'aawwwwws. Very cute, and very well executed.

Pretty pretty nice :rainbowkiss:
I'm not into shipping, but those two would make a lovable and over-nine-thousand-y cute couple. :raritystarry: Though I think Fluttershy could be a little... shier. No, it's perfect like this, otherwise I'd have diabetes.

Well... this was unexpected... I thought I had already scoped out the best shipping talent on the website, until I found this. You are getting both a follow and getting placed on my personal shipping gods list, good sir!

A nice little heart warming tale it was cool to read Fluttershy as being the first one to act. good job :ajsmug:

There are things in life that just need to continue. This is one of them.

first fic i read from lookin through the flarity group folder and it was exactly what i wanted.
sweet,adorable and romantic
very good dear author.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww :pinkiesad2:

I feel stupid. I actually thought this was similar to the (amazing) flash game with the same name. Especially since its romace great fic anyway

Oh my god, the Beatles reference. loved it.:raritystarry:

616764 Weirdly, I felt the pace was slow, but worked for the story. It's all perspective I suppose.

Rarishy is one of my favorite ships. Loved this embodiment of cuteness. :heart:

Aww, this was super adorable. Love the Fluttershy and Rarity ships!.

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