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Ahahahahaha, nice.
Talk about your awkward mornings. I almost would have called it complete as is, but I'm sure any continuation would be amusing and since it's marked incomplete....
YOU SERIOUS !?!?!?
i laughed my boner off at the end
what is this I don't even.
Did NOT see that comin'! You get a fave for pullin' THAT one off. Dear sweet Celestia...
Was not expecting THAT
. You deserve my fave and my upvote. Well done.
NICE! can we have an epilog to know what happens after?
Hahahahaha! Hilarious. That's what can happen when you drink too much.
Do I hear a shotgun wedding?
that's one way to get the farm
This was absolutely hilarious and boneriffic. Loled so fucking hard at the ending.
OH FUCK! Thats gonna be hard to explain!
Wow, thanks everybody! I really appreciate the comments since this is my first attempt at a FIMfic.
>>MyLittlePillager
Thanks! I wondered if anybody would pick up on that. Churchill's a great source for bitchy comebacks
>>mizu-okami15
Originally I had this pegged as Complete, but then I started getting ideas about what it would be like for AJ to make her way back into a tiny town where gossip probably flies fast...
Fucking fantastic. Keep this up.
Oh wow. I think the only time I laughed harder at clop than this was Luna's Safeword. That puts you in truly legendary company, imo. And gosh darn it, AJ's characterization is perfect. It's really rare to see a fic actually both focus on her and get her right, for some reason.
Have a very well-earned fav. And you wouldn't happen to have any recommendations for other good Applejack fics, would you?
Wow! That was really great written, you captured AJ very well. At least, that's how I suppose she is ;) Not much of a fan of Flim, but it's something new, that has to be said.
I hope you write more :)
I have too say that was one of the funniest fics i read and great imagination
Damn, that realisation moment, couldn't stop laughing
Loved.
one word: MOAR
Awesome. My running theory (full of holes, mind you) was that it was Fancy Pants. But that... just
I'm also a sucker for ApplejackxAnyone. Your characterization was spot on. Like/faved/subbed.
awesome. just. friggin. AWESOME. i laughed my head off at the ending
Grammar is off, weird choices of words, AJ's accent coming and going... this is good, but needs a decent overhaul.
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Fair enough. I wanted to suggest at her accent rather than always spelling it out, but if that reads as it disappearing, I'll try something different next time. Any words in particular you thought were weird/out of place? My OCD wants to know for future ref
701409 Well, it was pretty good for the most part, just a bit more slang, but it would be a good idea to take her down a notch for most of the time. There's transcripts of the episodes that you could use for reference, if you like. AJ's dialect is hard to write for, I found that out the hard way.
There's a fanfic here called "Applejack's Clopping Partner" (clopping means dancing in that fic, by the way), and I feel that it's a decent example of how AJ talks. I'm not saying you should copy it, but having a reference could help.
We know how she sounds like, so a bit more subtlety would be a good idea (in my opinion, anyway), but not so much where we don't know she's the one talking.
You did a very good Applejack, by the way, I don't want to come across as negative here.
I did not see that ending coming. And that's high praise coming from me.
you mean she had sex with
poor applejack
It would be interesting to see how this story progresses. This is a pairing that I have not seen before.
OH SHIT
This fic is hilarious.
Never. Ever. Say those five words.
Drama heavy sequel inbound?
ALERT!
Tempting fate detected!
Tactical Murphy inbound!
Oh yes, I've been looking forward for this story to continue so much!
Huzzah, it continues!
NOW YOU FUCKED UP!
This is the last story I expected to update, and yet, here it is. If it's your intention to baffle me, you have succeeded, for I have no idea where you're going with this. But I wait with bated breath.
Great another chapter!!
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Haha, yeah, sometimes I just can't leave well enough alone
This story, I like it. Is there more comin?
2254068
Haha, thanks. I'm trying to figure out where to take it next, so.... any input would be appreciated
This, I love. I'd forgotten this story.
What... But... You...
Oh my fucking god.
THAT came completely out of left field!
LOVE IT!
~Skeeter The Lurker
This just gets better and better...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Whoops! Tooooo soon Applejack.
But... Maybe she can blame that on the whole Honesty Element thing...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Quite enjoyable if I do say so myself, though I find it strange that applejack can put both hooves over her mouth without falling on her face.
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Must have taken lessons from Pinkie Pie.
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OH MY GAWSH I JUST FOUND SKEETER!
I see a severe lack of upvotes on your comments.
3312797
Yes. You have found me.
Your reward is a recommendation to read this fic.
~Skeeter The Lurker
OOPS.
Oh Jackie Jackie Jackie. You got some 'SPLAININ ta do!
Oh. Dear. She done let the cat right outta that there bag.
Also, zero, she's got a fancy necklace that says she is an honest mare.