Under The Stars

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Princess Luna asks Anonymous to check on Twilight Sparkle. He does so. Meanwhile, Spike is being weird and Rainbow Dash does not lift.

Short, cute Anon x Twilight story.

Second person this time, contains mushy stuff, random shit and stupid references. You know, the usual.

Teen for some language and sexual references.

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Dr. Vodka

Dr. Vodka #1 · Jun 5th, 2015 · · ·

sexnificent.

Dustchu

Dustchu #2 · Jun 5th, 2015 · 5 · ·

You bring a hand to your green, featureless face and scratch your black question mark, shrugging.

This had me laughing XD hahahahaha!

Nice job!
This was a nice one shot.

Captain Tucker

Captain Tucker #3 · Jun 5th, 2015 · · ·

Pretty good story. The humor was pretty good (most of the time) and the lead up to the kiss was well paced.

Lupus

Lupus #4 · Jun 6th, 2015 · 7 · ·

You really could have lived a long and happy life without the need to know what happens when mixing vaginal secretions and cake batter.

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Mortal Kombat

Mortal Kombat #5 · Jun 6th, 2015 · · ·

good news. bad news.

bad news: this isn't your best work.

good news: its still better than 98% of the other shit on this site.

...NOW DROP AND GIVE ME 20!!!
new story ideas.

Nosfrat

Nosfrat #6 · Jun 6th, 2015 · · ·

6061813 Yeah, this wasn't exactly an elaborate story or anything, just a cute little one shot I randomly thought of. I just opened a blank .txt and started greentexting, took me like half an hour.

What would you consider to be my best work, by the way?

Mortal Kombat

Mortal Kombat #7 · Jun 6th, 2015 · · ·

6061825
Personally I like Symphonic Symphony. but then again I'm a little biased so...

I saw a lot of effort went into it and it as a narrative it really shined.

however, I feel like your best is yet to come. If you can find the right combination of strengths
(or maybe stepping out of your comfort zone) then you could produce your best story yet.

remember man if you need an editor, or someone to bounce ideas off of.
feel free to PM me. I got your back bro.

Nosfrat

Nosfrat #8 · Jun 6th, 2015 · · ·

6062008 Thanks man. I wasn't even sure I'd be able to write another story after my last one, I couldn't bring myself to write anything during the past six months.

pahnazd