The Zebra (with apologies to Edgar Allen Poe)

by LoyalLiar

"Nevermore"

Once upon a path less trodden,
I walked in rain that left me sodden,
and set in search of herbs with which to brew elixir pure.

Upon that road I wandered stray,
and found ahead and in my way
a patch of flowers brilliant blue that tempted me with sick allure.
Then my fate was sealed, fo’ sure.

‘Beware, beware’, I once had warned,
Alas, my own advice I scorned
to spy the foul nature of the Poison Joke that lay before.

As I realized my error,
my striped body filled with terror,
and my tongue took on this foulest cadence that I now bear forth.
Quoth this zebra “I’ll procure,
the antidote, on my detour.”

So ahead I trod thereafter,
My hooves treading soil far faster,
Seeking, longing desperate to find the herbs that I’d implore.

In a beam of sunlight resting,
Heart's Desire, waited, resting,
in the midst of hydras nesting,
nesting on the forest floor.
Only they, and nothing more.

Fetching forth my shaman’s stave,
I steeled my nerves, for I was brave,
and knew that I would rather die than rhyme this way—so foul, impure.

So I leapt into the fray,
and as I speak, suffice to say,
that as the sunbeam glimmered, glistened, off the neck rings that I wore,
those foul hydras could not stand to keep me from the herbal cure.
Of this fact, I must assure.

When the battle fierce with frenzy
came to end in, glory, and the
envy of the other shamans of my lands on foreign shore,
I secured my precious plants
(and did a little vict’ry dance)
‘fore turning back toward my hut where more ingred’nts waited for
my careful hoof, and nothing more.

In my home both warm welcome,
concealed behind a mask named Malcom
(and I must protest at just how hard it is to rhyme decor);
there I hid my second need,
a bottle full of secret seed,
but when I looked upon that flask, my heart sank down beneath the floor
in pain that I could not restore.

The seeds I needed were expended,
and though I tried and I pretended,
the truth was I lacked that which my potion wanted for.

Worse still yet, I thought in passing,
with new horror, still surpassing
that which I had in my years of alchemy e’er known before:
those rare seeds that I required
grew not of Joke, nor Heart’s Desire,
but a plant that only grew along my people’s distant shore.

Ego’s Weed, we called the reedy
stalk of which we hoarded, needy
for its strange and potent powers to undo spells both foul and poor.
Yet it only grew when seen,
and so in glens both brown and green,
we set up masks that fooled the plant to think it was viewed with ardor.
Just a trick, and nothing more.

But with each trip that Apple Bloom
had come into my living room,
her rambunctious nature caused my masks to fall from my front door,
and their hooks on walls and more.

So my Ego’s Weed had withered,
and it could not be delivered.
I knew that a great voyage ‘cross the waves to home would I endure,
if I sought to speak once more.

Twilight Sparkle’s glistening castle,
held the tool that I was after:
a swift and silent air balloon, not seen nor used since Season Four.

I rapped twice upon the ingress,
and Twilight, seeking to impress,
in no more than two mere seconds flung open that gorgeous door.

“Zecora, what brings you to town,
so early?” and then with a frown,
she added “Please, you’ve got to help get Pinkie off of the dance floor.
She’s been holed up in there since four.”

“I fear I cannot help you yet,
but please, heed me and do not fret,
for I have need of the balloon you’ve hidden here since Season four.
I must travel far offshore.”
Twilight frowned. “Whatever for?”

Before I could elaborate,
in rhymes that left me quite irate,
Pinkie Pie rushed out from hallways decked with gems and gilded doors.

“Zecora, what’s wrong? You sound sick!
What’s with all of the trochaic
octameter? I don’t like it. Sounds depressing, that’s for sure!
Ooh, sounds spooky. Nevermore!”

I’ll spare you now a full transcription
of my elaborate prescription
necessary to remove the curse that I had suffered for.

Once my recitation finished,
Pinkie’s smile had not diminished.
And she insisted that she join me on my quest to foreign shore.

So we packed up the balloon,
with cupcakes, ice cream, giant spoons,
and other implements of waste that she found at the party store.
Only this and nothing more.

The fire lit, and up we flew,
into the open, cloudless blue,
for Rainbow had found ten seconds to clear the sky between her snores.

And out across the open sea,
we flew, and threw a ‘sea party’
that left me in a fouler mood than even twisted rhymes before.
I’d never been skysick before.

After days of sweets and candy,
in the distance I saw sandy
beaches that I recognized from months and years that passed before.

Longing for a lime or grass,
or any other plant to pass
for food that wasn’t laced with sugar, my eyes filled with thoughts galore.
Even seaweed on the shore,
I dined on it, and nothing more.

“Well, we made it! Where’s this Ego
stuff we need? And when can we go
meet some zebras? They like candy? 'Cause, you know, I brought some more!”

After moments spent to vomit,
I shot off, a stripey comet,
looking for familiar masks that on the trees would mark my spore.
T'was all I dreamed, and nothing more.

Pinkie followed, gaily hopping,
somehow tracking, never stopping,
‘til will shrill and piercing shriek she cried out with her whole lungs “Score!”
Only this, and nothing more.

Yet I’d say nothing more was needed,
for ahead, a field was seeded
Rich with Ego’s Weed and ringed with striped and spotted masks galore.

Not long after, I combined
the potion that was there defined,
upon the page contained in Supernaturals’ rare and precious lore.

And with a sigh, I breathed aloud,
That precious breath, drawn tall and proud,
and there pronounced my judgement on that foul blue weed that made me sore:

“No more! No more! Nevermore!
I’ll burn that awful plant, for sure!”

Author's Note:

Apart from a few grammatical edits, this fic is presented as it was produced, during the 2-hour period for the Iron Author competition at Everfree Northwest 2015. I hope you've enjoyed it.

Comments

[Zennyth]

Twas a different read indeed
More knowledge of Poe I think I need
To fully understand and appreciate.
But to cast these rhymes under such short time
Is a task most impressive and great!

[Iron Sky]

Zecora seems like a really hard character to write dialogue for, and this is easily some of the best I've read.

I forgive you for having her break the fourth wall, but just barely.

[SIGAWESOME]

How doth the stripe'ed zebra mare
Put on her trav'ling cloak
And look for herbal reagents rare
Amongst the poison joke!

Oh how her pride did overreach
Amid the toxic vines
She is bound up now in her speech
To awkward, stilted rhymes!

This was a fun read.
Good job with the Raven adaptation!

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But to cast these rhymes under such short time
Is a task most impressive and great!

I will certainly say!
(Although a good rhyming dictionary works wonders...)

[Fillosof]

Congratulations, LL.
I've drifted quite far from the ponydom, but it's always great to see one of your favorite authors wining something.

[horizon]

I can see why this won. This is quite impressive for speed poetry!

[Pega-ace]

Comments:
The repetition of "more"
The consistency is poor
As the usage grows and wanes across each stanza

I believe you cannot rhyme a word with itself
But for the rest drink to your health
For this story leaves me hungering for more

And out across the open sea,
we flew, and threw a ‘sea party’
that left me in a fouler mood than even twisted rhymes before.
I’d never been skysick before.

[8542Madness]

This was a really enjoyable read. It's easy to see how this won. I cracked up quite a bit at the though of poor Zecora stuck with Pinkie in a baloon while under the affliction of Poe.

[Chadbane]

I love the title of this story! I've read Edger Allen Poe's poem, "The Raven," and was quite impressed with how you played around with it. Have a thumbs up from me, good sir!

[furryman]

Did you read my mind? I was thinking about doing something like this.

[CommisarSilver]

Nicely done!

[Skeeter The Lurker]

Hah, brilliant, dude.

~Skeeter The Lurker

[Aotrs Commander]

Spectacular, and even more so if you managed it in under two hours.

Actually... It occurs to me this may be more or less the only Zecora-centric fic I've ever seen/read.

Huh.

[Hillbe]

Rarity you silly foal
In dragons hay you had to roll

Does Spike have a brother distant?
You know that dragons can make rocks pregnant?

No time to waste we both must run
The price you pay for too much fun

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[Mister E]

Trochaic octameter!
And original as well, without mimicry.
Although I have written three Zecora stories in poetic verse, this is something I doubt I would have ever been able to do. And certainly not this well.
This was a true feast for the eyes.
VERY WELL DONE!

[Show Stopper]

I've been looking forward to reading this since I heard about it at Everfree NW. Very well done, sir!

[PegaSista101]

Kudos to you for being able to write a poem in a meter that's most likely hard to use. Not only did it actually make sense, but it was entertaining! I'm sure Edgar would be proud.

As a sidenote, I like the idea of Ego's Weed. The fact that it only grows when it thinks it's being watched is intriguing. It definitely sounds like a plant that you would see in MLP.

Also, a few lines from the poem that I really liked:

those foul hydras could not stand to keep me from the herbal cure.
Of this fact, I must assure.

(and I must protest at just how hard it is to rhyme decor);

a swift and silent air balloon, not seen nor used since Season Four.

What’s with all of the trochaic
octameter? I don’t like it. Sounds depressing, that’s for sure!
Ooh, sounds spooky. Nevermore!

Good job!

[-Pinkamena_Pie-]

I'm the only one who can break the fourth wall!

[TheOneAJ]

[LoyalLiar]

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I am gobsmacked! What a great surprise!