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Twilight Sparkle has never touched on the subject of love and wants to find it. However, a certain cyan pegasus wants to get her attention. Will things work out, or will they fail and be left heart broken?

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Is this your first story? If so, then well done indeed! I will be following this.

Besides, asking Twilight if she was interested in her should be the easiest thing Rainbow could ever do. How hard could that be…

fucking hypocrite.

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What do you mean? Twi only sees RD as a prospect, whereas RD actually wants Twi only. It seems like quite a gap in terms of interest.

I haven't read this yet, but if there's not a least one scene where Rainbow Dash says "Please notice me Twi-senpai" then I am going to be very disappointed. :derpytongue2:

andtheauthorwillmakeasequeland...

Godammit, Pinkie. Stop breaking the fourth wall, it's there for a reason!

It is maybe weird, but i honestly never saw Twilight as the princess, that would have to work much more, at least not the same type of work the others are doing. Right now she has her weird table, and i guess she is going to fix friendship problems, because she is the princess of friendship, maybe works even better if she isn´t trying to lead them, but maybe in bad times.

Not sure if i could describe that point in a good way, but however, this was good till now, i hope this isn´t going to be done after six chapters, but i can´t have a long story like that everytime i guess, i just fear that Pinkie is helping, is going to make the story finish even earlier.

Meanwhile, a certain element of chaos felt a shutter like he was being mocked by somepony. Weird.

Bro, that's hysterical!

Cn we hav mr plz?

oh what. Where the heck did pinkie pull that from?

aerial dynamics

Hahaha. Nonono- you mean to day "aerodynamics" Aero means air, dynamics means motion/forces.

Oh....God! The ending :rainbowderp:

Twilight let her down in the nicest and gentlest way, she still felt that any rejection from her crush would be world ending to the pegasus. Which is why she resorted to impressing and trying to get Twilight to come to her, for her to ask and to give Rainbow the assurance that she would accept her love, no rejection, no fears, no embarrassment. “Why won't you notice me Twilight?”

No, Rainbow, you're supposed to say 'sempai'!

“Are you guys marefriends? You gonna get married? Ooooo, I need to start make plans for a reception! You two gonnagetaplacetogetherandliveforeverandeverandgonnahavefoalstogetherandtheauthorwillmakeasquelandillbeauntypinkieand…”

PINKIE NO

Suddenly, Pinkie was side by side with her, the earth pony’s cheek pressed up against her’s. “I thought you would never ask.” Pinkie struck a pose while her hoof was wrapped around Dash’s neck, almost suffocating her. “No time to waste Dashie! Operation TwiDash is a go!”

PINKIE, PINKIE STOP!!

“Please… please notice me Twi-senpai”

YES! WE DID IT GUYS, WE DID IT!!!

...this is gonna end quite awkward for both Dash and Twilight, isn't it?

Comment posted by femikol deleted Sep 22nd, 2015

"I am serious. The author already said I was. Look, the plan I have is fool proof. It'll take time but will be worth it in the long run. Just trust me Dashie."

I don´t now about that kind of joke anymore, sometimes I focus on a story, and forget everything else for a moment, and then a part like that is always interrupting me.
However I´m happy for the new chapter.

Besides, asking Twilight if she was interested in her should be the easiest thing Rainbow could ever do. How hard could that be…

A lot harder than you think Twi.

“Please… please notice me Twi-senpai”

Suddenly the chapter title makes sense. Also my reaction....

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Oh man I really hope to see more of this keep it up!

new chapter please

This story is really cute. I hope it continues :)

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