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This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.

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NOT PEACHES :pinkiegasp: i wish the humans could stay forever

I'm liking it so far.:moustache:

Liking it so far :pinkiehappy: Not sure what else I can say sadly.

I do like the idea that Equestria's sun is actually lethal to humans though. Its a shame that things don't work out for the better with a lot of the pony-human couples. But hey, it adds a nice touch to the backstory, the ever present danger that, no matter what, they have to go home or suffer horribly.

Quite sad as well :(

I was putting off reading this since i was gonna play tf2 but you do make awesome stories swiper so im glad i read this :pinkiesmile:

......These cliffhangers will be the end of me, I swear.

Favorited because of the FREAKING CLIFFHANGER. :ajbemused:

Hrrggg. :facehoof:

I would have favorited anyway, but that's the main reason. :rainbowwild:

Disturbing. I think I'll skip out on reading this, However I'll not dislike something I've never read.

The greatest Human x Pony love story since Catherine the Great. :derpytongue2:

'Melissa'? What, she doesn't get a cutesy embarrassing nickname like the other humans?

Edit: Oh, right, 'Daylight'. Never mind. :derpyderp1:

"and she kissed him"
And then they bucked.

>She curled over he legs
>tall grey and white pegasii parents


hmmm? No human tag.

that last statement was hilarious:pinkiehappy:


I'm guessing the last line was supposed to be funny.
If so, I don't get it.:rainbowhuh:

i had a sudden thought about ponyville the other day.

so canterlot=D.C

so that would make ponyville NEW JERSEY!!!!

WHAT HAVE I DONE?! :facehoof:

Because of you Swiper


624507 Tl:DR

it is a synopsis of the entire thing without being to wordy


Personally, I guess maybe I've seen it more as something like, say, from Texas... like the suburby parts of DFW.

i really didnt know where to place it at first and now i cant get it out of my head

So, what did you think of the whole story?

Did I do an okay job portraying a human girl for the first time?

dude you did good. you basically were able to make someone born from the 90's. so ya man great job

Sweet! :twilightsmile:

>She didn't come across as too whorish, did she? I was going for more 'spunky' and 'funny'.


like i said dude you hit the nail on the head

thats a no she didnt come off as whorish


Looks like vaginas e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png

I was thinking of a car grille.




The vaginas of your world scare me.

Well done, Swiper!

Featherweight has seduced her with his awkwardness
i must learn his techniques

well done
i would love to see more featherweight out of you
and some more zecora
maybe both at the same time
..... :pinkiecrazy:

First, be adorable:

Next, be hung like, well, like a horse.

That's right!

Also, be very kind and bashful but have interesting stories to tell as well as being a great listener.

Peaches, NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

627091 :rainbowderp: that moment that i just realized that my friend looks like featherweight
other than that...i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/108/590/tumblr_likkepXdqY1qaj5jro1_500.gif

... Fucking finally I could set enough time aside to bloody read this!
Great stuff as always and oh god another fic idea. Hope you don't mind if I steal your universe for it:rainbowlaugh:

Hmm...now which ponee will my human OC get to fuck?
Back on topic; I didn't really like the ending at all, bad experiences and all with smaller cousins. Restraining order from panicking parents. :raritydespair:

Comments typed at 3 am are best comments. :pinkiecrazy:

Oooooooh... maybe fuck one of the cuter background ponies that don't get enough action. Roseluck? Mayor Mare? Junebug?

Anyways, glad that you love it!

Please let me know when you write your new thing!

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