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Love that song, great story. A lot of emotion written beautifully. Thanks
MY GOD! this story is touching... we dont see many shipfics about one of the mane 6 and a O.C pony, the story is well written as what it is: several anecdotes
GOOD JOB i wanna see future works of yours
I love it! Very touching, and I love that song.
Well done.
Tracking, starts now
Very good fic
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At the time, I didn't really think it would be necessary for me to write this. But I decided to go with it anyway, and It was actually fun writing this
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Fics based on songs might be a rarity since this was a challenge from a friend. Good to hear that it faired well
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One Republic's songs are beautiful. Simply beautiful. But I seem to find Apologize to have more meaning than the others save for Secrets and Good Life.
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Thanks :P
There might be future fics based on lyrics should I ever come across a challenge like this or if I simply feel like it :ppshrug:
The flow was good and the emotions were captured very well.
3 criticisms I would have is slight mistakes with grammar here and there, tenses sometimes and the formatting. I got a bit confused as it was jumping from one event to another sometimes. Maybe if you made the different events more distinctive through the format?
Otherwise, I enjoyed reading it very much
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