i am a major mlp fan so i might get a little carried away with my imagination with extra ponies! But don't worry! My stories never fail me!
Starsweets, daughter of Princess Luna, is miserable without any friends. Then her mother sends her to Ponyville to try and make her feel better. She then meets the Cutie Mark Crusaders and has a pit in her stomach when the start laughing at her. Her life, and story, starts there...
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I won't rate it yet but somehow it's a little too chaotic for my taste. First it doesn't match up with the show - if Luna really is in her thirties then it would set the story millennia before her banishment to the moon, and if Starsweet is six years old and born after the defeat of Nightmare Moon then the CMC would already be adult mares. It's quite anti chronological... Besides that – I really don't get the laughing part at the end. What was so funny? And would the CMC really be these kinds of jerks?
Never less the idea has some potential 
Looks like you have started a fire.
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THE CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS ARE OUT OF CHARACTER.
Dear lord guys, I am now not accepting any nasty remarks. I mean come on!
yall aint in the right head. its a random story no trashin somthin that took me 3 months to make the pre-write for. 
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ummm.... what do ya mean dude?
and before i work on another story, HOLY CRAP THATS ALOT OF DISLIKES! honestly, you expect a 6th grader to write a good story? and yes i lied about my birthday so check my profile if im correct.
*sigh* peace out everypony
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i had liked the story but what the scootaloo did was way out of character for the cmc girls it would have made more seance if Diamond or silver said it beond that i loved it i hope you return to it
srry everyone! been busy wit gravity falls! The likes have gotten boosted up since last time so i might continue this. Oh and i might change the CMC cahracter to Diamond Tiara. Sorry to all who i disrespected in any way! ~ Melody
Hello! I CHANGED IT! Ya happy now? I had to destroy the ideas i had. 45 WHOLE PAGES DESTROIED! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
FUCKING CRINGE ATTACKS. I'm way better at writing stories now...
So much cringe...I MADE A FRIGGING MARY SUE IN 6TH GRADE?! Damn...that was 3 years ago. O3O I feel old.
Well...this is awkward....I sorta forgot my password to the lunasgirl21 account so I sorta kinda had to make a new one. And Celestia damn reading this now (I'm 15 and I was 12 when I made this) I'm cringing at how bad this is. *sigh* I'm sorry I put you guys through this... -Mercury (formally known as Flitter)