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Citrus Recluse


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sometimes when i write stories, i crash into a wall called Writer's Block:pinkiesick:

Interesting Role Reversal........

I'll follow it.

7477174 To keep the wheels on their chair moving smoothly, of course.

What did YOU think (s)he was talking about? :unsuresweetie:

If Rairity is going to hit each of her friends you should include spike as well.

7477174 I love this story more please

I'm getting strong Rarity's New Performance vibes fron this, which is very much a good thing!

7477174 you write pony porn, you're not allowed to use the TMI card

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Ooooh yes I can. Just because I write it does not mean I should suffer through having to know in explicit detail what other people are going to do with it.

>This story is a sequel to Rarity To Room 69
FUCK YES :pinkiegasp: :pinkiecrazy:

7479686 you write porn, what else are people going to do with it?

Oh i think i like where this is going. As always can't wait to see what will happen. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Bimbofication means that the woman becomes stupid, right?

7486944 It's a bit more nuanced than that.

Personally speaking, I'd probably define "bimbofication" as a woman's transformation from a normal personality/figure to an overtly sexualized caricature of their former self, with the physical aspects of the transformation enhancing their breasts, lips, etc. to fit the stereotype, and the mental aspects lowering their inhibitions in regard to sex. Reduced intelligence is a very common trait for the trigger, but not essential, in my opinion.

I like what you did to Flash. I wonder twi will try fix him. I would like to see Rarity himbofy Big Mac as well.

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You phrased that way better than I could have.
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I have ... plans for him.

7488661 I can't wait to read them. Will spike also appear here. It would be funny if he kept on being a gentle drake and refusing Rarity.

Great chapter. Spike got himbofied and twilight got down on Flash. Also Fluttershy got hypnotized. I wonder how pinkie is going to get changed.

I wonder if Rarity is going to go to the direct route with one of them, just put the breast in their mouth and let them drink

7493361 will see when this story gets updated

A Bimbo male could me classified as "Sissy"?

"Fine by me! You know what they say about the journey being more important than the destination,” Pinkie Pie said.

Especially when you've got spurs that go jingle-jangle-jingle, and you meet some nice gals along the way...

So this is the final chapter?

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I think I may have misspoken/left something out of my Author's Notes.

It was meant to be that this was written to potentially be the final chapter, if writing the '*real* final chapter proved unfeasible. But it didn't prove unfeasible, so there is just ONE more chapter after this one, whenever we can get it edited, and then THAT will be the final one.

Discord watched the blast barrel towards him. At the last second, he pumped his fist into the air.
"It was worth it!"

Yup...

"Hello, Discord." Celestia said. "Would you like to, like, drink milk from my big boobies?"
"Hello, Discord," Celestia said. "Would you like to, like, drink milk from my big boobies?"

Double

"Hello, Discord." Celestia said. "Would you like to, like, drink milk from my big boobies?"

"Hello, Discord," Celestia said. "Would you like to, like, drink milk from my big boobies?"

I think you wanted this part only once there right?
Nice Chapter as always.

There should be more TwilightxSunsetxCelestia threesomes.
Or just more TwilightxSunsetxCelestia shipping.
Or just more SunsetxCelestia in general.

I agree. But i hope someone even dares to make a SunsetxCelestia shipping story with them being mother and daughter. I would like to read such a story. Incest is wincest :moustache::trollestia:

7571120 Damn you was faster. I knew i should not have taken so long.

And YES "It was worth it!" But i must say i am a bit sad that Luna did't join the fun. :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Nova25 deleted Apr 2nd, 2017

>“I don't want to grow bat wings and fangs! … or sparkly skin
>>… or sparkly skin
-Boo ! BOOOOOO ! **throw popcorn with a shovel** Shame on you !

>There's a tiny liitle pattern
-little

>“Paring Nurse Rarity.”
-Paging

>You must be tiredm
-tired

>Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't see you - Flash Sentry?
-Ahhh... Why ? Just... just why ? That's like adding pee into a soup that was otherwise pretty good. -_-

>All you have to do … is suck Flash Sentry.” She gestured to Flash, who waved and smiled nervously.
-Amongst (if not THE worst of) the most cardboard cutout, bland, and empty ''pseudo-character'' in the series... A pure unfiltered mood killer.
I don't know what the author thought by adding ''him'' in a SEX story. -_-

Smoking... It had to be... siiiigh.
I never understood, and will never understand how poisonous shit is supposed to be viewed as ''sexy''. Heinous and illogical...

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As a final note:
All in all, I conclude that 'this' story, especially when compared to its predecessor, was far less interesting(and original)- and particularly less 'engaging'.
The first one was excellent, 'this' one not so.

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