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Brony For life 7


I've been on an extended break. I think it's time to do some more finger exercises!

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---Directly after Patapon 3---

After everything the Patapons have been through, from the Zigotons to the powerful Arch Pandara. They have finally made it to Earthend, though they still can't find IT. But just past Earthend they see something, another land of equal if not greater beauty. Surly IT must be there, looks likes it's time to strike the drums once more, because after all they will stop at nothing until they have a chance to gaze upon IT!

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This story is born from boardom, lack of concentration and a love for Patapon!

This story will update, or should update frequently with chapters ranging from very short to quite long.

Also, I still own no names!

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 15 )

This here,looks promising.I hope that the quality remains the same through the following chapters! :pinkiesmile:

......Uh.....what? Was this necessary? :rainbowhuh:

6053011 Yeaaa...Sorry, just a short battle chapter. Others are promised to be longer and better....Or at least longer. The next chapter will be longer and have some story progression. This one was a bit on the short and pointless side..OR WAS IT POINTLESS?!? :pinkiegasp:

6053059 ....right....i see this chapter kinda pointless and im not saying anything else

What´s with the less amount of words every story i see at the moment?, or at least a great amount of it?
Such short chapters are maybe not everytime bad, but not to special either.

okay the first chapter doesn´t say much, i am dissapointed because of two other storys befor this, and this right now isn´t a long chapter either, but i give it a chance.

it starts to get funny, but you should try to have 1000 - or at least 2000 words.

6053086 i think i have to agree, not a bad one, but pointless i guess, at least as long as it is that short, it could have already happened in the last chapter.

I don´t know if it is becaus its sunday, or if the story feels a bit strange, but i think it is the sunday.

Well the story is not bad, but a few chapters are very short, and i don´t know maybe it is a bit random too.

I can´t say much about it, but i can´t say that it is really bad.

It has returned:yay:

Sound the drums, its time for war!

This was originally your first version of the previous chapter or did you come up with this to buy time?

8002077 Neither really. It's what would of happened, and thought I would share it with the readers. The real next chapter is in the works, this one just got finished faster.

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