• Member Since 2nd Sep, 2014
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She's just the dirty-by-trade tomboy.

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Sometimes you just need to scream. Fluttershy knows this.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 19 )

Cute! Thanks for sharing!

:flutterrage:

:rainbowlaugh:

:moustache:

(shortest review in history of reviews)

... This was... I'm not certain what to say. It was good, don't get me wrong, but it underwent a huge shift in tone between each chapter. I was prepared for two unrelated plotlines, but not two completely different themes.

Sometimes you just needed to scream.

Oh god, I know how that feels.

Both snippets were fairly interesting, but just too short to really draw me in. The second chapter in particular might make for an interesting one-shot of several thousand words.

Fluttershy couldn’t help but darn a soft smile

Do you mean don?

6041128 I always use darn in this context even though it's illogical.

Much of it's been said before. I rather enjoyed the first part, but it was too short and, like you said, had nothing to do with the second part. Still liking though /) Keep at it

But...so many questions! Need more! :raritydespair:

Poor rainbow...

6044049 Just wanted to. Isn't the first story with a blank canvass as cover art.

6048312 I wrote another story with a blank white cover.

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I bet he did mean "don," but I honestly prefer it as "darn." It means to knit, and sounds like she delicately crafted a smile. The word sits well with me here because Fluttershy does it. The author accidentally poetry.

6127708 Not quite as accidental as you might think. :yay: But thanks!

Who knew? Fluttershy is a Zonker.

(Wonders if anyone else is old enough to get that rather lame pun.)

Yeah... I think should have just posted both stories separately and try to hot the minimum of a 1000 words.

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