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jayisabluebird


he/him - I like cute things and horror - I've been on this site for a long time so i apologize for any comments or fics I may have written lol

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NOTE: this is very old and I was like 12 when I wrote this so please keep that in mind lol

On a quiet day, Pinkie becomes curious about her family's rocks.

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This needs a bit of work from an editor, but it was a fine little one shot. I liked the very beginning--it read like a child's storybook, and that gave the fic a nice effect. I can't help but feel like Inkie's role may have been better suited for Maud, though.

6038906 Thanks for responding! :twilightsmile: I ran this story by my new editor so hopefully most of the typos are fixed. I was originally going to use Maud, but I don't quite know how to write her character yet, so I stuck with a character I could start from the ground up with. But thanks!

i did a dramatic reading of your stroy

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