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I read. I read a lot. I also watch a cartoon about talking ponies. (I'm not usually so serious XD) On another note, I love, and am proud, to be crazy!


Fluttershy is flying with her animals (birds) when something starts to chase her. She accidentally flys into the Everfree forest and crashes into Discord's house. She falls unconscious and shows no signs of waking up.

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Woah.....this seems exciting! Now, since this is your first fanfiction, I can give you a few pointers:
Try not to make it too rushed, it will let the audience understand what exactly is going on.
You may need someone to look over new chapters you write because there were spelling errors and some sentences didn't make sense.
Other than that, that was really good for your first time writing!

The next one will probably take a long time too

That's OK, take your time.:scootangel:

:scootangel:I can' t wait for the next one! I'm a ghost because you killed me by cuteness .

Cool! first to comment!
and, this is good for your first fic.

Good! you say what is happening! example: *real world* so... :derpytongue2:

"Alright, why did you do this to Flutters you big bully. I'm gonna pound you for this" Rainbow flew up so tha she was eye level with the innocent Discord who immediately had to dodged a punch from the angered, cyan pegasus . "Hey! It wasn't me. She crashed through my roof and I thought that you might want to see her, so that we can help her get better, sheesh" Discord cried out in his defence after recovering. "He might be right Rainbow, look at the hole in his roof, and he did bring us here, didn't he" Twilight said to Rainbow, who was slowly landing back on all fours. "I...guess" Rainbow Dash said suspiciously. "I can use a healing spell on her, but I don't know if she will wake up" Discord said hopefully. "Well then what are yer waitin for" Applejack cried out while stomping her hoof for emphasis.

Please tell me rainbow dash isn’t that stupid. And applejack needs to calm her a** down.

That was unexpected.

Is this going to continue? Because, I would love to see this side of discord more.

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