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It's funny how random life can be, how a single action can define the lives of so many ponies and change everything in ways we can't even imagine. In a world were Rainbow Dash never accomplished that legendary first rainboom, the lives of all the main 6 have taken quite a different path. Now, in the wake of Nightmare Moon, an exiled mare must return to save not only her teacher, but the whole world.
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My brain malfunctioned for a moment.
This story.......was approved?
Okay....the moderators....are weird. I.....am....wow....
I can't even......Jeeze
One word, Editor.
6215759 I think they may have been like "Haha, guys, check this out! Let's approve it as a joke!"
6215832 Ugh....-_-
Well lets see here. I at least applaud your attempt at writing but It might do you some good to check out one of the proofreader or editor groups and as for some help, if you already haven't. I also suggest using Google Docs to write in the future since it automatically helps with grammar and spelling. You can't just post something and expect people to just comment the mistakes, that's how you get trolls and hate comments.
May we bow our heads in sorry as the English language was murdered today. May it rest in peace.
In all seriousness though, I don't care if English isn't your first language. That's not an excuse not to get both an editor, or proofreader (unless you go my route and publish it for the soul intent to see how good/bad your raw writing skills are. Even then it's not an excuse).
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Holy hell this needs work!
Well to everybody thanks for at least taking the time to read this,I know it is a gramatical mess and to those of you who are native speakers it was probably a painfull read. I'm working on geting an editor or profreader, also the reason I don't use Google docs is because I do most of the writting in my tablet as is not exactly friendly with a lot of computer programs
6215832
It's way too late for that. April was three months ago1
6215845
Intentional typo?
6215911
Maybe find a keyboard adapter for it?
6215912 oh shit, didn't even see that lol. In that case... yes it was my plan all along ;)
How do you screw up English this badly?
6215759
I think the mods only approve these due to them being so bad they're hilarious.
6216632 Ugh.
That's disappointing.
6216073 I don't know, maybe it's not their first language, you moron! My mom speaks some Spanish, but that doesn't mean she speaks it perfectly.
6216970 Well, the way you wrote out that comment seemed like a lash, didn't it? I pmed the author, and he said he's going to put more focus into learning English before he continues writing. "How can somebody screw up English so badly?" can be classified as an insult, for sure. A simple "You should put more focus into your English" would be nice. And while insulting you wasn't a mature route to take, you can't pretend you didn't come off as insulting.
6217279 Point is, this story sucked hard. It failed the most basic of spelling and grammar. Also, you're a hypocrite. You joined in on making fun of this guy's story, yet you call me out for a (well-deserved) comment? Even the Mexican immigrants at my school knew how to write better sentences.
Geez guys theres no need to fight, you can both hate me equally; by the way I'm happy to hear mexicans are finally getting some respect back in the states good for them.
For all the rest I would really apreciate if you could stop pointing out how much my grammar sucks( I know it does but that happens when you learn a language and then don't write anything for more than 5 years,I sugest you do the test and see how that goes).
I would really really apreciate if you could please take your eyes out of the grammar and actually tell me what you think of the fucking story please
6217672 My comment was more out of spite to the moderators, because as far as I'm aware, them allowing this to be submitted could have been a cruel joke. And while your Mexican classmates may speak more fluent English, that doesn't mean they write super fluently. Just because the grammar was poor doesn't mean the story was bad. I mean, what he has set up here is pretty good starting material, he just needs to fix his spelling. And why are you deleting your comments?
6218694 I don't hate you.
6219267 I don't think you do,that was just a silly atempt at the old "you dont have to fight for me I can love you both "cliche
6219266 I didn't delete that one. The author probably did.
6218694 Sorry.
6219663 Oh.
Still better then some of the stuff I've seen on here.
True you probably should get an editor but it wasnt that bad. Mostly it was just nitpicks here and there.
Your biggest problem is not uploading more. I want to see this story progress.
Looking forward to the next update.