On a seemingly ordinary day, Ponyville is thrown into mass chaos when Twilight's latest spell goes awry. The Mane 6 must separate to solve the chaos Twilight's broken spell caused, though they're not exactly alone for their separate journeys either.
Rainbow Dash's must team up with her heroes to save a reckless pegasus from the now-living Rainbow Factory, Applejack and Rarity must keep the now-foal Princesses in check, Fluttershy and the love-stricken Big Macintosh need to journey into the Everfree Forest to find what's disturbing the animals, Pinkie makes a new, somewhat destructive (and very hungry) friend, and Twilight must do her best to fix the whole thing.
As expected, things don't get any less complicated when a tank, two dimensional-traveling ponies, a wild minotaur, murderous rainbow soldiers, and Derpy are thrown into the mix either...
More Info:
--Slight Crossover with Kirby--
--Shipping: Fluttermac and Carajack (well... more or less played out for laughs for both parties)--
--Contains sexual themes, crude humor, and a blatant reference to the-fiction-that-shall-not-be-named--
I see what you did there
First.
Can't wait to accualy read this. It looks halarious.
Wait "rainbow dash's" plural? The world is going to end!
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that awkward moment when you're not really first.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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excellent
If the derpmister's there then the derpstalker will be there!
Warning! I'm an English Professor, so expect me to be a ruthless nit-picker! I go
Derpy changed to Ditzy at the end
Kirby, use copy! Da-da-da, da-da-da, da-da-da, dah! Da-da, da, da, da-da! Kirby became Fire Kirby!
Awesome. Love Pinkie breaking the fourth wall, agian, but I think you could have slowed this down a bit. This is just a tad bit rushed, but great otherwise
Booyaka, awesome ending. Ditzy saves the day
Wow, fluttershy snapped
, didn't see that coming
. Hopefully she'll feel better soon. And this story is amazing
!
Satan is in Equestria, ohhhhhhsnap. You sir, are a perfect level of crazy.
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I had to copy this from Fanfiction.net, and the entire story up to this point was using "Ditzy Doo" instead of "Derpy", since this was made before her name became official. Upon the transition, I tried to replace all the "Ditzy" with "Derpy", but I knew I was bound to miss one.
"...after the object in mind has been refrigerated to a temperature approximately twenty percent cooler than its base temperature after ten seconds of continuous air-time..."
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Also, Twinkle? I think I spy a Twilight reference.
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It wasn't until your comment that I realized Sweet Tooth is supposed to be Kirby. Even though I read the description that mentioned a "Slight crossover with Kirby". I'm an idiot.
My obliviousness aside, I really enjoyed the story so far. I'm looking forward to the rest.
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Control + f on a PC, or command + f on a Mac, then type Ditzy into the search bar that shows up.
Question: is the fiction that shalt not be named 'Cupcakes'? If it was, I'd say you captured the basement perfectly!
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Indeed it was. Thanks!
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657350 I have absolutely no idea what you are trying to say. (Not sarcasm.)
Poor Discord!
Well, poor everypony, but you get the idea.
im kinda hopin Discord saves them all from certain destruction...
wha t the... ive been mainly only reading about the filly celestia and luna parts but this isj ust crazy
i offically am scared
Ditzy: everybody loves Fluttershy
...........
Satan's in Equestria but, where's Leo
i love how the 2 mysterious ponies are Tiff and Meta Knight
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Well, for picking that up, have an obligatory Flutterrage emoticon that I use far too much on this site and pretty much everywhere else.
Can't stop the laughter
Big Mac is going pepe le pew on fluttershy, a pinkie and kirby (or sweet tooth) team up, and rainbow bronies! hahahaha
Just one question who are the two new ponies (the pegasus and unicorn who got blamed for the pie)? I'm missing that reference
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Glad you like it!
As for those two ponies, they are just minor OCs who are connected to Sweet Tooth, which will be explained later in the story. Up until their explanation, they're pretty much there for (even more) comic relief.
really good story, P.S. idea for your next one incase you havn't thought of it already kirby+minotaur= not-so-hungry-kirby if you catch my drift
And things have just become even crazier and funnier. The awesome is over NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!!!!
I want sex, between shy and mac.
Hot
Steamy
Applesex!
Sorry I am kinda drunk reading this stuff.