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by Super Trampoline

Chapter 30: Sunset Cuddles

Super Trampoline yawned. He had had a very long day of writing music and pulling carts here and there and also playing some board games with his friend Sound Byte. Sound Byte was a computational machine programmer and also played cello.

Anyway, he kept yawning, and Sunset Shimmer noticed. She was staying at his place during a brief trip back to the Pony world. She had a different boyfriend back in the human world, but here in Ponyville, all the main characters are dating Super Trampoline.

“Tramp, Honey, if you are so tired, you should just go to sleep and stop writing ‘My Tiny Gecko’ fanfiction.”

She was right of course. So Super Trampoline finished the chapter he was writing and went to sleep.

Comments

[Dlaf rferg]

This is actually kind of well-written, even if you're trying to get as many downvotes as possible.

[Super Trampoline]

8632750
They don't let you write poorly written trollfics anymore. When I started to get sloppy, they unpublished this. That's why I'm republishing one old and one new chapter at a time, tidying up things as I go.

[Dlaf rferg]

8633532 Huh. So how was the formatting before, then?

[Super Trampoline]

8633534
On the chapters so far, pretty much the same. but some of the later chapters I'll be cleaning up a LOT of intentional typos. Here's a famous example of what one used to be able to get away with: The Spiderses

Here's the Rainbow Dash Presents based on it:

[Dlaf rferg]

8633543 I remember that episode of RDP! That was a good one, but I liked Bittersweet more.

And oh my actual god, that story is actually a black hole of illiteracy, where no grammar can escape it's pull.