Note: Rethinking the approach on this story. Will be made teen and other changes before I continue.
A young thestral has just recently completed his grueling training. Though he had thought he was ready for anything, nothing could have prepared him for the chain of events that were set in motion as he led his first mission.
"This story in based in what we would know as a Dark Age setting, though with ponies whose names we are familiar with."
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Very interesting story you got here so far. At first I thought that this was going to be a crossover with dragon age but I'm pleasantly surprised that it a completely different story. Are the main six going to have a major role in your story or are they going to be more like background characters that appear when their needed?
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Well, if you have read the second chapter you know their're are only foals and don't even know each other at this point.
6039304 Twilight is a filly in this chapter, so it's set in a pre-Mane Six era. The chances of them playing any major part would be very slight. At most I think their younger selves might have a few cameos.
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Yea I've read but I didn't know if you where planning a time skip or not. Although I probably should've check the character tags first...
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Those will change when new characters appear though.
feed the many mouthed beast of greed, moar, MOOOOOAAAAAR
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I'm translating the next chapter at the moment. 50% done.
Drem yol lok
Greetings
If I'm not mistaken it is Circe. Right?
P.S. Great chapter/story!!!
This is pretty good. It deserves more attention.
And something else that I'm going to follow forever...
Nice! I like it so far. So, when is the next update?
Also,
I think that should be "If".
6131949 Thanks for pointing that out
That was a really cool intro! The inquisition so far reminds me of Withers, and that is by no means a bad thing.
This just got better.
Two ponies meet each other for the first time, have a conversation and then proceed to have sex....... seems legit.
Ooh... Uum, Kay.