Gonna try this whole writing thing again.
Twilight's at the end of her rope. If she stays with her relatives, she'll lose her little brother, the only real family she has left. So she makes the only logical choice and leaves. What now?
Co-written with my good buddy Nomad_Sigma when we were bored. My first ever completed collab! Wooo!
This is a humanized mlp re-telling of a small portion of a favorite manga of mine, Faster Than a Kiss.
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WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is interesting to say the least. Good job with this story. I hope you enjoyed writing it.
A good attempt for a first time collab between you two.
I think 'Few, if any' works better.
'it was as if'
Awesome sweet little story, I like it.
I'm not familiar with the source material being crossed over with, but this feels like an odd place to leave the story. How would this situation work out in the long run? Also, I feel like more could be done to sell this as the best possible outcome for Spike & Twilight.
Still: Upvoted. My feelings of dissatisfaction are mostly related to wanting to see more of the story.
6015366 I thought it was cut a bit short myself, but Nomad seemed to think it was fine. XD The source material is like a 12 volume manga, so this was a minuscule portion of the whole thing. Just a bit of practice for both of us really. Not meant to be anything too serious. XP
err ... wat? haha
Wait, isn't that a thing only horses and other creatures with hooves do?
6351186 Nope. In the literary world, it's used to describe hurried jogging or someone having to increase their speed to keep up. Works for humans or ponies.
6351223 Oh, cool. I am just too used to pony-verse fics..... By the way, how old is Entropy/Discord in this??
6351238 He's 34 or so.
6351246 Will you make any sequels to this? If not, it's alright....
6351301 Naw. This was just a writing exercise with Nomad.
... Didn't see that coming, but its was kind of cute
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I'm not trying to force you to write this but
WHAT THE FU hmm hmm sorry but that ending isn't an ending if your not going to finish this story then please give it to someone else it's a great concept and I would love to see it play out I won't force you to write it but my god you did a he'll of a fine job that's why people wanna see more of it
7340341 Lol, to be honest, I forgot all about this story! XD I know Nomad wouldn't want to continue it and I haven't the motivation. It was just intended to be collab practice for us. If you or someone else wanted to write a continuation, I've no problem with it.
Ah, Discolight. Not my favorite ship, but still good.