Meinos Kaen was born and raised in Italy since anno domini 1988. You’ll never find a person with a harder accent to pin to a precise geographical location.
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"On it, Chisel!" She was perfectly able of multitasking.
able?
OH! she's missing her 'cap'. Got it.
Good pacing - solid progression from place to place. Missing out on _why_ Tombstone was at Stable 43 in the first place, missing out on what he's after and why he's after it - I'm assuming this is all intentional.
Confusing mentions of the Elements. The physical manifestations of the Elements are safe and secure with Spike - at least in the canon Fo:E.
Solid. Hire another editor - I only was able to keep the count of grammatical errors in my brain, I forgot the locations, but there was 'two'. Well Done.
Oh Roxy shes already grown onto me but I think she needs more lines in the story in my opinion. Also whens the next chapter?