• Member Since 30th Apr, 2015
  • offline last seen Jan 29th, 2021

PhoenixBlaz3


When life gives you lemons, extract the citric acid from the lemon juice and sell it as teeth whitener. Might as well make a quick quid when you're gonna die anytime soon.

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Just a story I thought of, about how DJ PON3 and MC W1SH fell in love. With a casual meeting, to a blossoming relationship, this story of true love is one that will sound like music to your earsThis is my second story, please comment on what I should do better and what I did well, so I can improve in my last chapter.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Dangit! Put the second chapter in the first, and now the comment i wrote isn't here! Oh well...

When I finish the next chapter I'll put it into the first chapter. However I haven't even started it!

Sorry, guys. I cancelled this story as I don't see it going anywhere.:fluttercry: If I get a few likes, I might come up with an idea to carry on.

I don't see anything wrong with this, but i know that others will toss just about anything in the scrap heap just because. Proof= two likes, two dislikes and only two views on one of my stories... makes you stop and think. i would defiantly read more if more was written!

6401826 Ok, thanks! I'll start brainstorming any ideas and see if I can get this story up and running again! :pinkiehappy:

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