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Wet dreams, dank memes?
Eh, I don't really like it. The writing's not the best, and the concept unoriginal. But, then again. Should I have expected anything different?
Hey For anyone whos reading this and has or will dislike this fic, please comment on why you dislike it so in the future I can make it better. That really is all I ask of you readers.
6201075 What do you mean by that?
:)
Okay, right off the bat, I think this would have been better if you had made it with your own crew, like your friends or someone you know that isn't YouTube-famous. Also, if you wanted it to be with the crew's story, I'd say that you should have the perspective as entirely the GTA character, instead of someone playing GTA.
This definitely has potential if rewritten, and I think that if you put a bit more work into it, it'll definitely be worth Favoriting. For now, an upvote for concept and enthusiasm.
6231799 Thanks,
The concept is unoriginal and rather off-putting. The self-insert with wish fulfillment HiE premise really doesn't do fanfiction any favors.
6348363 well I may cancel this story.
Self inserts are always such a bore. Anyways, I feel like you could have done something better with the Gta thing. You all became mercenaries that work for the military, why not be criminals? You could have chosen a million different games to be a mercenary soldier, but why be one in a crime game?
6755683 i dont know, its just it seemed good at the time. Though this story needs a major over haul.
Cant wait for the next one
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More plez?
Update?
Oh yeah that girl said on my lap when she was 2 years old I swear to God that I'll rip freaking skin off anyone that f****** wronged her