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Sgt Muffin


I like ponies and reading Fallout Equestria.

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War, War never changes.
Through out history, ponies have done so much in this small world, most of it goes unnoticed, but some things, some things never go unnoticed.

From the busy streets of Manehatten too the War at the front, all the way to the desolate wasteland come stories of ponies living their lives. These are some of their stories.

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Nice beginning of the story, but I am a little disappointed that you really only posted the beginning. I find it very hard to tell if I will like this story as it has a very ambiguous description and it has only a small part of the story posted. I would suggest either making the description tell us more about the story, or posting another chapter soon. I would definitely have suggested to post another chapter before releasing the story, but I guess it is a little for that now. Anyway, good luck!

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That's it, that is one short story. They are only meant to be stories of 1000-5000 words.
I thought that ending was pretty easy to understand, so did my friends, obviously it wasn't for some.

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Ok, I guess I must have just misunderstood the type of stories you are putting here. I had thought it would be continuing on in multiple parts per story. So, are the stories going to connected in any way, or are they just going to be a bunch of stand-alone stories?

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Stand alone for the most part. I have another story which is a long narrative, but I don't want to write it unless I have a lot of time to get a few chapters down. With my last year of school I don't have the time, but I do have time for some small stories.

Yeah, I know the feeling of not having the time would like to write. Well, good luck. Hope you can find the time. :twilightsmile:

Boom.

So, this is a piece of noir put into the FOE war, hm? Needs some corrections in story flow and spelling here and there, but overall, pretty nice. Maybe a bit too unrelated to the source material, but still nice.

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I am writing another that is a long one based before the War... kinda more of a side story to that I guess.

Also, could you point out these spelling errors?

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