Future of the Equestria Girls

by Rye Snoot

CH 6 The Quick Escape

Stain turns his head to the left and sees people are following them.

He whispers to Twilight's ear, “Were being followed we better hurry.”

Soon as they start to fast walk to the ship. Blaster fire came from behind them.

Derpy walks to the corner of the ship and trips and falls down to the bottom of the ship hitting the button of open fire.

Stain uses his hands to get the last person on board, “Rainbow we need to get out of here.”

Rainbow gets to the pilot seat and turn on the ship and punch the gas pedal with her right foot. The ship starts to levitate from the ground. Blaster fire from the gangs shooting at the ship.

Stain ran to the cockpit of the ship and turn on the ship shields with his left index finger.

Derpy hears that loud noise coming from the cannon fire however, no one was hurt from the gangs.

The ship flies to outer space. The gangs starts to head to their spaceships to follow them.

Comments

[Titanicgaming360]

Oh dear GOD your grammar.
This is a brilliant premise, but I hold my collected works to a very high standard of English proficiency and this might actually be the worst grammar I've seen. Get an editor and get a spellcheck and you'll do great.

[Rye Snoot]

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I just got back to writing.

[Titanicgaming360]

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Hey, look, I would rather read the writings of a drunk whale than my own dialogue. We all start at the bottom.