• Member Since 15th Jan, 2015
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DiscordFan


A thirteen-year-old pegasister that's using MLP to stabilize her aggression.

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You needed love, and I gave you some. Now, I am your mother. I love you as you love me. My resentment for your race didn't stop me from helping you.

And that was far from a mistake.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

I loud, wailing noise of sorrow resounded in my ears.

A loud...

I'm sorry, I can't stay, but know:I love you."

but know: I love you.

Tracking this. Show me what you've got.

I like it. keep it up.

Well, I do not like the First Person Perspective bit. And honestly Twilight seem to become attached WAY too quick IMO. But as a parent I can somewhat see it. It's pretty much an instinctive reaction to protect and care for children. As a species evolved from herd animals, such instincts are probably even more powerful. Combined with Twilight being female as well, I can understand it. Still seems a tad forced though. HOWEVER, there are several things that are going on in the story that leave me wanting to understand more. So... I will watch. Make it worth it.

wait, if all it took was a bit of magic to heal her and fix her changelingness, why didn'tt Celestia just do it?

also didn't this just end Twilight's main problem of raising a changeling?

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Twilight was thinking by instinct, and Celestia didn't think it was possible. And her and Midnight's bond is too strong already.

6067686 how far are you on the next chapter

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Not far. I have a lot of stories...

6124029 thats understandable so i can wait

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