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That was pretty neat, although I have absolutely no idea what's supposed to be going on :facehoof:

Satire and Spike... makes sense he is the only one with a sarcastic side.

Exciting. Though I must admit what he said about mere infatuation intrigues me greatly. On one hand he might mean its stronger then that on the other hand he could be spying on her to gather intell. Very intriguing.

I'm not sure this is so much satirical as it is romanticized though. Satire is more poking fun at something while sounding genuine (sarcasm) romanticized is making things out to be greater or more fantastic then they are.

The hay did I just read? :applejackconfused:
Keep it coming, I'm intreagued now :)
Btw I don't think it's manikin but mannequin - English isn't my primary language though so I might be mistaken :twilightsheepish:

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'Manikin' is an acceptable alternate spelling.

(Although I've seen a bunch of authors try to work a pony pun in there somehow, like 'ponikin' or 'mannequine'.)

Hay thanks guys! ^.^

This is really just a test run. I already have the entire story mostly finished besides editing, but I wanted to see what ponies thought of it before dedicating my time to finishing and posting it. It's looking so far like something that I will end up doing though...

Ok two things can be happing. it says a view in his everday life. So Spike sees the world as the big as war where he can have fun. Sounds like high school.

Or. ARE YOU A SPY? :trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft:

You can now go view the "non-pony" version of the story that I originally did here; http://www.bubblews.com/news/184709-a-distorted-reality

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