Many have heard of the Swords of Justice, but not so much their mortal equivalent. The Shields of Justice have not been around as long, but they definitely do good, however, not all of their number are pure. Just after this brutal realization, an ancient, almost forgotten god is released, and brings their number to Equus, including the bad apples. Now, with the help of the worlds pony denizens, Their leader, Gallavant and his allies must find their betrayers and rid the world of them, before they corrupt this beautiful, relatively good new world.
Chapters (3)
Looks interesting so far. Can't wait to see what other team members there are. I supposed there will be an aegislash judging by the cover.
Also, nice poke at the other larger stories.
Typo? Or random gender swap?
Also, it's major bs that there are obviously people disliking it without reading first.
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That would be a typo. Thanks.
So far, so good. The only thing I have issue with is that, from the description, there are going to be "evil" pokemon, or at least not very good. I'm not sure if Arceus teleported all Pokemon, or just the best (since some stories have a bit of both). If these pokemon are evil, it looks like Arceus gets some more egg on his face.
Regardless, looking to see how this goes from here.
Nice start bro, remember if you need an editor. I am here to help.
That bit of background made a huge difference, nicely done.
Good luck with your story, and welcome to Equss.
Intresting start^^
the pick of pic for the story makes me think only one thing: Who told him to commit suicide by holding life draining ghost sword?
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It won't do that if they know eachother well ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Errr, he said his mother was a kadabra, wouldn't he be part of that family then? Since Pokemon always take the form of their mother and the moves of the father.
Speaking of that, would Toki even be there? Not sure if Arceus' itinerary would've allowed anyone who'd kill their friends for money would come, unless Gallavant was correct and there really was more going on than it appeared.
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We'll see~
And also, in this verse it's sort of an even chance between the two. Someone made a blog post about it a while back.
so, gallivant is asked to help translate for them, but Thunderlane and Raindrops already heard about them being betrayed?
was that a mistake, or did i miss something when reading (i do that sometimes)
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Pokemon can learn to write ya know.
5996784 okay. it didn't mention and i wasn't sure
Looks like a good chapter. Keep it up. How many members are there exactly?
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I dunno... however many I feel like having. I'm making more up in my head as I go.
Isn't that Aegislash nice?
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I'm a little confused as to what You mean by nice
6047147 By that I mean he didn't really hurt any guards even though they attacked him and he busted what looked like a very shady business. He's a nice guy.
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Compared to what I've heard about the other ones, Cody seems well adjusted. Bit odd that the guards weren't surprised at all by Gallavant, or have they become used to psychic pokemon already?
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They probably were surprised, but they were too focused on catching Cody to really acknowledge it maybe.
This is interesting but I think I'll let you build up a few chapters before I really get into it.
I would love to see this continued soon
Awesome picture!