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Violet Runner


A brony that is into Steampunk

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Long ago, a brave hero banished a great evil, fighting along side an Alicorn. Now, a millennia later, a young boy must discover his destiny after being sucked into Equestria when the evil returns and threatens both earth and Equestria.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

a good start, try to add a bit more non-verbal dialog to match all the verbal stuff and try to get your chapter length between 2k and 5k. other then that i hope to see more of this story.

Comment posted by Thewildwolflink deleted Sep 27th, 2018

the description of this story reminds me of my oc, Drawing Sign, my first original character when I first joined the fandom. Odd.

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