• Member Since 16th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Nov 7th, 2019

RhulainSabermane


I love to write as a hobby and I'm a student of Marine sciences. I won't upload and load stories as quick as other may like as real life calls, but I love writing.

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A short family/friendship story that takes place some time after the Royal Wedding. Was inspired by a picture by Doggie999 on Deviant Art.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 17 )

This was enjoyable. being the oldest out of 4 siblings I understand how little quirks are for your younger sibling.

Being the youngest of three.... Fuck it

well that was weird as hell.

Liked it:moustache:

but quirk or not, it is kind of perverted (even if it is not intensional):pinkiecrazy:

I don't know if I want to read this. I'm very anti-incest (does that make me prejudiced?), so...probably not.

It's not incest, I just based the behavior from some anime shows. I've always found those funny.

609697Now that I think about it, this does remind me of peoples behavior in anime. For that, you win.

This deserves a moustache









































































:moustache:

What a nice relationships.. :coolphoto:

I like... :moustache:

Shining Armor, wtf are you doing???

Ok, this might sound rude so please don't take this the wrong way. I don't like the way you ended it, the rest of it was really nice but the last bit there just seemed......odd. I don't know why but it just rubbed me the wrong way a little.

All that being said I really like the whole idea of it and overall you did a fine job of it. I was wondering if you would mind if I took the basis of the story and gave it my own spin to it. I would understand if you said no, and that you would want credit if you said yes instead.

Either way, this was adorable and fun.:twilightsmile:

I thought this story was pleasant. I wouldn't call it cute, funny or even great. It was pleasant. It was something nice to read that filled up my time, but nothing more. This story needed more. By that I mean it was too simple. It didn't have enough to be funny and it wasn't sweet enough to be called cute. I agree with 2487794 because the ending was bad. I think that you should've stopped at that last 'Click.' It would have been a funny way to end it. It would make you think "Oh, Shining Armor. You'll never learn!" This really isn't a great piece. I can't say that I like it.

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